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| vballmania23 2008-07-19 ch 26, anon. | abuseI was afraid this was abandoned - So it was awesome when I went back to read it and saw an update! |
| SilverJadlyn 2008-07-19 ch 26,  | abuseOHH I read this chapter already...but I'm still eagerly awaiting! But, might i add that since Harry is above everyone else in Tom's books, that Harry should have his own unique mark and perhaps somewhere that isn't so obvious as an arm...perhaps his chest or his back?? It's just seems so obvious if Harry were to get it on his forearm and the same one everyone else has...that makes harry the same as everyone else...and we can't have that now can we... love the story! I have been following it for a long time, and I am waiting all the time for an update! |
| Tobang 2008-07-18 ch 26, | abuseWell I lie it a lot even if your update pace is atrocious. ~Toabng |
| kazekyuu 2008-07-17 ch 7, | abuseyou keep spelling does dose |
| Mahna 2008-07-11 ch 26, | abuseJust gotta say, I love this story..Its a Darker Harry..but not one thats all 'omg, you looked at me wrong and I have no reason to when I couldn't even hurt someone yesterday, but I'm going to kill you now and go evil'. Way to go..Hope the next chapter comes out soon, can't wait to see Harry get the Dark Mark! Cheers, Mahna |
| vikram somanna 2008-07-08 ch 26, anon. | abuseamazing story... i have read lots and this is one of the very best...eagerly awaiting update keep up the good work |
| Inconclusive 2008-07-03 ch 26, | abuseOh, delightful. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, as always. |
| livvie333 2008-07-02 ch 26, | abusePlease, PLEASE update! This is an amazing story, the best I've ever read in mystery with a really unique plot. Don't wait another 4 months to update- I know you can do it soon. ESPECIALLY since it's summer! You have so many readers waiting, please? :) Also if you get the chance, please read my story 'Never Again'. |
| Geovanni Luciano 2008-06-20 ch 5, | abuseI have to say that what you are writing and them following with A/N's that contradict what the reader is picking up. Perhaps you should just leave your A/N's out. It's not really helping. Geovanni Luciano |
| Geovanni Luciano 2008-06-20 ch 4, | abuseOK personally, I take the Tom Riddle train of thought of there is no good or evil only power. Harry wasn't dark in this. A bit snarky, yeah sure. He was antagonizing Tom a bit making him feel a little more commonplace, but not dark. Geovanni Luciano |
| Geovanni Luciano 2008-06-20 ch 2, | abuseWell obviously with you A/N you're looking for the redemption angle and I'm sure that Tom will be a little put out when he realizes that Harry is a parseltongue. What then? Geovanni Luciano |
| Geovanni Luciano 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abuseWell, first, I have to say interesting chapter. I've not read your story before nor have I read any reviews. Your time frame is off, and I am fairly certain someone might have mentioned it to you. I look forward to what you will do with the story. Geovanni Luciano |
| imaginative figment 2008-06-19 ch 26, anon. | abusenumber one: ep! those things are a lot more permanent than harry thinks. number two: i don't think pagers are that popular in 1949; they weren't invented until 1956. so, unless riddle is from the future, he shouldn't know about them. when one takes the savoir of the wizarding world and turn him into an evil minion, that is what called a bad seed. lil' tommy spreads his roots underground (slytherin, not secretly) and grows into something dangerous (like the whomping willow). |
| mindless ranting 2008-06-19 ch 25, anon. | abuseNO! what he does doesn't affect reality. what he does doesn't affect reality! stupid dumbledore. no one should listen to him, ever. good with the twists and turns. |
| HumptyDumptyWasPushed 2008-06-19 ch 24, anon. | abuseadding in draco was a stroke of brilliance. |