que evil and slightly disturbing theme music here. are you going to have a paul and suze relationship? i can't find many.

Really good ^ ^ Keep going!
Will Paul survive? Or will he need to be mediated by suze?
What happened with Jesse?

That's so good! Please please please please please please please please please please update soon!

x

GAH!
I SEROUSLY LUV THIS FIC!

PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

i truly do hope that u update soon, though!
I MEAN! IT'S BEEN WELL OVER A YEAR!!

i dont wanna sound mean...but...THIS IS SUCH AN AWESOME FIC! I DONT WaNT IT TO GO TO WASTE!

so, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, update soon!!

U ROCK SO MUCH!
-sevvy

its g ood and i cant wait till the next chapter!

NO! Paul must not die! Please no!! Update soon please but don't let Paulie die!! Make it s PS please!

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please update!
i think you might have given up on this ff, but i havent, its a really great start! its got alot of portential actually, so DONT GIVE UP
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
I LOVE IT!
PLEASE UPDATE!

JUST DO IT!
Lol... think you might have got the point... x

yea!finish it dude/ette!!i think iots not dat bad u no..

All hail to me, Mashed Potato Queen of the Universe!
Well, my household, anyway (which consists of 3 people and a cat, mind you).
Where was I?
Oh, yeah.

All hail Maddy, Supreme Ruler of the Galaxy.
WHY, might you ask, is she the Supreme Ruler of the Galaxy?

I have no idea.

Anyhoodles, Maddy, darling, that was simply beautiful. That there, is the beginning of a masterpeice, I tell you.
And NO, dammit, DON'T ARGUE WITH ME!

*preens* (a skill I have learned from Maddy... ;-D)

So. See? I was right. In my last review, I said:

"s he, uh, dead? (DUR! Ha, watch him not be dead now, just because I said that.) Aw..."

Pfft. Go figure. He's still alive. Meh. Well... at least I had the sense to check myself, eh?

I really do like this fic. I think it's going to be quite interesting. Hmm... I wonder how Paul's going to react being operated on by Suze? Usually, he was the one doing the operating. Pfft. :-P But Suze sure was shocked when she found out!

One thing that I'm wondering about, though, it what happened with Jesse? Obviously Suze has some strong feelings towards him, but they're not affection. Anger? Regret? Dissapointment? Bitterness? Where is he? What happened between them?

Well, that's enough questions for now. I know you're still in the midst of pooperish tests, so I'll leave you be. I haven't talked to you in a while, that's all. I miss ya, Mads.

So... now that I've actually checked my FF updates for the first time in about a month, and I've read this lovely chapter, I'll be expecting -- no, craving -- more. Of course, don't write any more until you have time. You're a busy, albeit ditzy, bimbo. I KID! DON'T HURT ME! I was REFERRING to the title of your CHAPTER, you woman. Hrrmph. Anyway...
When you get the time, update. And write me an email, you dingaling!!

*snoggles to Maddy*
Love,
Monny

P.S. I, like, totally and way, like, a lot, loved ur imitation of that accent!! LOL!11! it was like, so hawt! HA! so heres my, like, imitation for u! Hehe

Smooches darls. I love ya.
:-*

*gulps at the sight of punjab*

Yes, Mistress Maddy. *bows down to the Great One*

*snort* I.M.! How hilarious. Loved the update darls.

Jasmine.

that was so good! for a first timer your story is really good, im lovin it! update soon!

UPDATE__UPDATE__UPDATE__UPDATE__UPDATE!

omg, you can't make Jesse DIE...i love the story, but Jesse DYING? *sob*

omg!
This is really good!I hope its gona be a paul/suze ff! hahaha, loving it!
Please update real soon!
Love Sofie

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