Oh, that was god. It really made me think. I love the dialogue between Krad and Satoshi, and of course the Dark/Krad reference thrown in there. Delicious.

Wow. That was beautifully written. Good use of words.

this is brilliant and beautiful. So true and so very very insightful into the characters.
Its satoshi to a fault. (sorry, badly put - but I do mean it) ^_^

Nice. It is a very interesting concept. I've never thought of something so simple as the meaning of words to different people. And I see wht you mean that there is a lot of dialogue and not enough story, but I personally think it's fine (though my standards may be sub-par yours).

Very nice portrayl(sp?) of Krad, I rather enjoyed the comparison that was made between 'Krad' and 'child' at one point. The point at which you define Krad's understanding of 'fault' I thought was a great, in that it had that lack of transition, almost strange hilarity to it in the literal change...but it's semi-late at night, so I make about as much sense as something that makes little sense. See you tomorrow or something.

ah, this one definitely made me think, but you get that a lot don't you? i liked the bit about knowing as opposed to understanding, because they are truly very different things. very nice.

Wow... its so poetically and very skillfully written! ^^ The things Krad said could apply in real life... :P All your fan fictions are the best! ^_^

wow...another REALLY REALLY deep story Scribbles-chan! ^^...poor Sato...although i couldn't catch what was worrying him...anyways!! LOVED IT!! you are too deep and poetic for your own good! lol, jkz ^^, anyways!! did you see my msn name yet?? WOT! GOT DNANGEL VOLUME 9!! SO HAPPY!! *Jmps up and down* ok...need to calm down...although i can't wait till volume 11...so much is gonna happen in that volume...SO MUCH! anyways...loved it!! as i've told you before ^^, lo, and you say i have too many stories...but then again...you have an exception cause they're one sors...-_-"...anyways!!
Ja ne!~
Jessica!~

sweet. I now understand the 'Riku-centric' thinger. :D

this makes sense. i agrre with it.