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| sasudia 2008-05-06 ch 4, | abusehahaha this is funny. i like that even though some of the characters are ooc it doesnt even matter because the story is good. update soon! |
| Sabaku No Eva AKA Saki 2007-09-05 ch 8, | abusePLZ update soon!!i mean dis story is HILARIOUS n VERY interestin n i cant wsit til sasuke and sakura get 2geder!!nywys PLZ update soon!!lol wel bye!! |
| Sabaku No Eva AKA Saki 2007-09-05 ch 7, | abuseo my god dat was soo funy!!"green r greenin" lol n d part where sakura shoves d stacks in2 her mouth n sasuke starin 2 d insane gurl n she chokin on it, lol hahahahahaha...!!lol wel nywys im stil smilin n luckily mi ma nu in ya so everytin kool!!wel nywys bye!! |
| Sabaku No Eva AKA Saki 2007-09-05 ch 6, | abuseo my god sakura was jus 2 HILARIOUS MEIN!o my god...i jus cudnt breathe in d part wit sakura lafin maniacaly n d oders sayin shes wierd n insane lol hahahaha...!!nywys lol bye!! |
| Sabaku No Eva AKA Saki 2007-09-05 ch 5, | abuselol i thout d fite was funy n i imagined it n den started crackin up but den my mom saw me holdin my tummy wile on my knees n told me i was crazy...wait a minute she always say i crazy...(it aint my fault i was born crazy)nywys lol bye!! |
| Sabaku No Eva AKA Saki 2007-09-05 ch 4, | abusei wonder if sakura granted dat wish?did she?i nuno, u nu say so nywys wel bye!!3 |
| Sabaku No Eva AKA Saki 2007-09-05 ch 3, | abusewow i wud LUV 2 c d fite...nywys wen i counted d pages i counted 19 but mayb i counted rong or d page was smal or sotin nywys lol again i wud LUV 2 c d fite lol k bye!!3 |
| Sabaku No Eva AKA Saki 2007-09-05 ch 2, | abuselol dat was funy...n wen i read sasuke face red n wide-eyed i pictured dat n actualy did laf n den my mom told me i was crazy...nywys dat was funy lol bye!!3 |
| Sabaku No Eva AKA Saki 2007-09-05 ch 1, | abusewhoa o my god!!now DAT is kool!!i wish i cud jus do magic lke dat but no im a human...hmp!!nwyws no srsly dat was so kool wen she did d magic ting n i can NOT beleve shes almost a genie koolio...nywys bye!!3 |
| Mayumi Crescent Moon 2007-08-05 ch 8, | abuseUPDATE!i luv ur story |
| BrokenDemonChild 2007-03-28 ch 8, | abuse*shadows covers eyes and an evil aura surrounds me*-spooky voice: OH!What's going to happen? *cackles* What about Orochimaru!? Ghost sound:WOHOH! *eyes shine with evil glee and then cackles* MUAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH- *cough cough* BUG! *weezes* BUG! *cough cough* (Interupting this comment for fear of your sanity! or what's left with it...) Ash-(BrokenDemonChild) |
| Kane Shi Megami 2006-11-07 ch 8, | abuseLove it, can't wait for more! |
| PrincessComplex 2006-10-29 ch 8, | abuselol sakura wants to enter? hehehe~ lmao i love their plan to kill kakashi. so original XDD |
| PrincessComplex 2006-10-29 ch 7, | abuselmao that alarm clock is so annoying.. if i had it i would smash it in a sec. hahahaha sasuke has a random mountain of gold in his living room ^o^ ah please update! i've noticed that your last update was in like in APRIL. O_O |
| PrincessComplex 2006-10-29 ch 6, | abuseahahaha the thing with the caterpillar was hilarious^-^ hehe sasuke ish becoming crazie |