Um I think so I have an impish Groundon

BTW, nice story!Searched for so long till I found a humourous one

Oh, my! This was very well done, and so funny! XD

Eh, I don't think I liked this chapter as much as the others. On the whole, it just seemed really anticlimactic and not as humorous as the first two. Of course, I suppose it's supposed to be rather anticlimactic and all, but I kinda expected a little something more out of the last chapter. I did like the ending, but I just felt like something was missing when I read the chapter.

As they say at the end of every episode of Teen Girl Squad,"IT'S OVER!" Well done! I applaud your skill at writing humor. I hope the next one you crank out is as good as this story! This is the Blue Phoenix, signing off!

That Designer IS mean.
Oh well, at least everything is back to normal. Sort of. And Rayquaza bored the other two to sleep. Good for him.

Yay, I actually came up with some of the dialogue in this chapter! Hooray for warrantees! XD

Link:

Poor Programmer.XD The game in this story is so messed-up! I said it once, and I'll say it again: Preprogrammed natures and legendary Pokemon do not mix! I wonder what happens next? Continue the story, please! This is the Blue Phoenix, signing off!

Rayquaza: Hi.

Link: Hi.

Me: Okay...wow. Good story.

I think this is really great, i couldn't stop laughing!

Ah, I didn't know that the programmer would be able to directly intervene. Heh, I can imagine a relaxed Groudon and lax Kyogre would take a lot of goading before they would actually start fighting. I'd say the programmer has quite a job in store for him, yes?

Ah, I feel sorry for the Producer. :( They're being mean to him!
Do legendary Pokemon really have randomized natures in the game?

Hilarious! I loved it, and I can't wait to see how this turns out! =3 It would've been really funny if that really did happened in the game...

~Kookie

Congratulations Flaaffy! I may have conspired with you to write this, but you PWNed all the funny details wonderfully on your own. I suppose you wouldn't mind terribly if I posted this in a Pkmn forum or two, would you? *halo*

This is a pretty good one. Ingame natures have always been somewhat amusing to me, especially when they're so incongrouous, like my timid gyarados. It's nice to see a fanfic about that particular quirk, and one that's done quite well. I'm guessing that Groudon and Kyogre ended up with something like lax or timid as their natures, then?

The only thing I didn't like as much was the cuts back to "real" life; I think that it would have been more interesting to have the 'fic play out entirely in the game world, with the fact that the characters are in the game itself coming out gradually.

Heh. This is strange. What natures do Groudon and Kyogre have?