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lila123
2008-03-22 . chapter 1
i dont know how manny times i wrote this to other fanfic writers but:

please please update
lila123
2008-03-20 . chapter 6
OH GOD! has the world turned out to have great ideas that J.K. Rowling doesnt have? it freaks me out!
ivy.luvs.dramiones
2008-02-24 . chapter 6
ahh no damb crap ** ok im running out of crusewords here that and i for got what im cursing about? hehe anyway great story so far i cant wait to see how it turns out good luk and updatesoon bye
lills
Dracosgurl2007
2007-07-24 . chapter 6
update son please love it write more
Readerforlife
2007-06-25 . chapter 6
**! hermione is SCREWD
dancerbaby414
2006-12-30 . chapter 2
Hi! I really like this story so far! But I just wanted to point out a little thingy lol. Draco can't really be Hermione's 'big brother' because he's actually younger than her... Hermione had to be 11 (almost twelve) when she went to Hogwarts, She was born September 19, 1979. And Draco was born June... something (i think 5th) 1980. But... it's okay! I thought you just might be interested!

Good storry! Keep on keeping on!
ilovefireyredheads
2006-07-05 . chapter 7
cool story
Songstress-nemesis
2006-04-14 . chapter 7
Wow i'd love to be in Hermione's position. Ron, Draco AND Sirius... gr
kikialiena
2006-04-03 . chapter 7
I love the twist! i love it! i love it! i love it! your the BEST! update soon? i really want to see the next chapter.
smut, maybe?
Jennifer Ducette-Haynes
2006-03-27 . chapter 7
ew is malfoy her brother?!?! and now she's gunna have sex with him?!?! thats just weird!

Sirius was an **! I hpe he realizes what he just did and that he is insanely jealous!

keep going! really good!

I LOVE IT!
Viktor Krum's lazyllama101
2006-03-27 . chapter 7
gr again update soon
Readerforlife
2006-03-27 . chapter 7
i don't get why she is stadeling draco...is it to make sirus mad or somthing?can't wait for the next chapter
Angellove727
2006-03-13 . chapter 6
Good story! I hope you are able to update soon!
The.Revolutionary.Children
2006-02-21 . chapter 6
wow i luv your story! Your dad had better get over it so you can continue the story cause its so good!
Update soon!
JessMess
2006-02-12 . chapter 6
i hope your dad gets over this "electronics are bad and evil" thing soon... if not for your sake, but ours too.
CYA
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