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| michelaski 2005-09-14 ch 37, | abuseShort ending...but then again, it said everything that was needed to be said. Looking forward to the sequel, later! |
| michelaski 2005-09-12 ch 36, | abuseAw...so cute...and I don't think you named the boy Eric by coincidence...anyway, great chapter! Love it! Later! |
| perfectcrime 2005-09-11 ch 36, | abuseTHEY NAMED THE BABY ERIC! That is so hilarious. I mean only someoine really into the show could come up with that, ok lie, someone whos pays attention to the Who Are You song at the begining could come up with that but still really cool. |
| Sara Sidle Grissom 2005-09-11 ch 14, | abuseI don't mean to sound harsh... but newsflash: Grissom isn't 34. He turned 49 august 17th. Again, not meaning to sound harsh, I'm not flaming. Just something that bothered me a little. -- SSG (who thanks you for the c2 invitation) |
| michelaski 2005-09-10 ch 35, | abuseOkay...now what? This is going to be a hectic bundle of chapters...isn't it? Anyway, can't wait for the next update. Later! |
| michelaski 2005-09-07 ch 34, | abuseUh oh..that can't be good. Let's hope that the baby isn't in too much danger. Looking forward to your next chapter. Later! Michelaski |
| michelaski 2005-09-06 ch 31, | abuseThat's very nice of you...Of course my wedding wouldn't be something too big...but anyway, great chapter and ending. Greg's gonna be a father! Update soon! Later!\ Michelaski |
| michelaski 2005-09-05 ch 30, | abuseOh no! You must update! You can't leave me hanging!! Hope Catherine and Greg make it out all right...what about Tara? Does she know? Can't wait for your next update! Later! |
| perfectcrime 2005-09-05 ch 30, | abuseI'm still reading! Plz keep going |
| Sazzd 2005-09-04 ch 30, | abuseI love, I love, I love! Write more, please! |
| perfectcrime 2005-09-03 ch 29, | abuseNow what Have I told you about cliffhangers, LOL, i'm kidding. I'm not even sure if I have told you inparticuarly about cliff hangers. I like this chapter though, despite the cliffhanger ending. And I do hope that catherine is ok |
| michelaski 2005-08-31 ch 27, | abuseApologies for the lateness!! School's been biting my arse for the past few days. I loved the two chpaters and it was very sweet of Gil to finally go out with Sara...anyway, looking forward to your next update. Later! |
| faithforever 2005-08-30 ch 27, | abusehey kara incredible job... it's a great story, don't be so modest to share with others it's great. you're very good at writing, update soon! i wana see what else happens! much love, jess |
| perfectcrime 2005-08-29 ch 27, | abusethis is great... again. I'm glad you brought back the banquet, I wonder if I triggered that or if that was your plan all along, anyway I glad it's back, and glad you got the Grissom sara going together part done so we don't have to worry about it. then again ghreg is engadged so we don't have to worry about him trying to be sara's date anyway. The dress-dresses, are b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l. I didn't even notice how few reviews you got untill you mentioned it. I can't belive you've only got 2 reveiws!! Well 3 now. Anyway, my sister wants to go on the computer soon so I g2g. bye. |
| perfectcrime 2005-08-28 ch 25, | abusethis is great. who would have thought that greg of all people would be the first one of the team to get married. I wrote somting similar to this once. At least with the story line that sara got cancer. i'm babaling now. LOL just like greg! BTW what happened to the ball thing that catherine was planning? I am think ing the right story right? I'm soo sry if i'm thinking of a diff story, I do that sometimes. But, wait hold on, i'm going back to see if I have the right story. Yes it is the right story. In chapter 3. Cathirine says she's going to plan a ball for all CSI people. I think you should add to that story part. That would be funny, greg with his fionce (I love that word evn if I did spell it wrong) and Grissom and Sara. who would cathirine go with? And if you did that you would have to describe Sara's dress because she just dosn't wear dresses, so that would be a RBD (really big deal). I've decided that i'm going to shut up now, relising that I have officialy written my longest review. and I click 'submit reveiw' as I and this story to my fave's list. |