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aFigureOfSpeech 10/6/06 . chapter 1
Oh. My. Gawd. That was really depressing. Good, but depressing. I've gotta go read something happy and fluffy now. Ciao.

-Berrie
Debbie 5/8/06 . chapter 1
very very touching.. i almost cried while reading :( but very nice writing :)
blackrose113 1/2/06 . chapter 1
that was a sad story. its tone is completely different from your 'seeking comfort' stories. i hope you continue it.
Small Tuesday 11/27/05 . chapter 1
Weep. Confetti. Angst. Love. Beautifully done, neonate.
ms.marigold 11/26/05 . chapter 1
Oh my, the last part made me cry. Very sad and touching..

Keep on writing

Ciao
Cursed-Melody 10/28/05 . chapter 1
I was almost in tears when I read this. It's a great story, but sad too.
alexandra 10/13/05 . chapter 1
the story was very good, but also very sad. did you write a continuation of the story. i'd be happy about that.
Name 10/5/05 . chapter 1
Too bad so sad :(
aznanime-eyes 9/1/05 . chapter 1
wow. This is deep. Kinda like how it made me feel on the final Kenshin OVA. Bittersweet. But i like. very nice.
heechul 8/31/05 . chapter 1
And can't you feel it?

Everywhere, whatever happens, whenever the sun shines, you know that winter's going to come soon. It haunts the same darkness in your mind. A fairytale is built on lies, a story that could have, should have, would have a Happily Ever After.

But nothing is Ever After. Everything has a sadness, a sin, a blackness, an oblivion that takes over.

So yes, your fic is beautiful, in the extremely heart-wrenchingly sad-yet-this-is-the-real-world-don't-give-me-crap way. Because your story is so true, that it's so beautiful.
Mistress DragonFlame 8/29/05 . chapter 1
... I don't get it. They hate eachother because their son died?
panik in love 8/29/05 . chapter 1
that was awesome! Yipee!

now i remember...update seeking guidance as soon as possible...i'm waiting!please!more neji x sakura fics!
Aaron 8/27/05 . chapter 1
wonderful story! you know that I have no idea about the Naruto characters or storyline. but that knowledge is unnecessary to be able to enjoy this beautifully written piece. you've done it again! so sad. so intense. I could feel the emotions of the characters flowing through me as I was reading this. great writing, my friend!
psychicbunny 8/27/05 . chapter 1
God that is depressing.

Well written, but extremely depressing.
nancy 8/26/05 . chapter 1
wow that was intrestiong but sad
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