hi I love this story!

Wow I love it! So Anakin :)

love it love it love it!

Ish the Bird. x3;; Anyway.

.. Wow. Interesting way of putting it, the whole freedom thing. Anakin's such a pessimist.

I especially like the fact that you added in a bit of the 'scenery,' for lack of a better word. Well... I'm not quite sure lava fits into that catagory, but, we'll let it slide.

Very well-written short piece, and I loved the "dying gift". Lovely.

Carpe Diem.

Diem.

Oh, nice. Very nice. :)

However, i do believe it's Carpe DIEM? i could be wrong.

But fab short piece, simply wonderful.