cool so far!

Oh I like it! It's soo kaiwaii! There's not enough fics with Knives in it before he went all evil. _

Awww, both chapters were just so sweet o I always love reading fics about Vash and Knives, and the ones where they're little are really fun to read.

*purr* Oh I'm a sucker for any young Vash & Knives fic... but especially any fic written this well! You got both of their personalities down wonderfully and I really enjoy your style of writing. Here's hoping for more writer's block XD

so incredibly sweet I'm melting into a little pile of Vash/Knives gooeyness... how wonderful, and great... tee hee... to imagine where it all ends up...

*sniff sniff* this fic is so sad...Damn you steve! weird as this may sound, i also liked knives, altho not more than vash of course! i like him because i can sympathize with him and i can identify why he is like that. i just love him when they were younger! it wasn't his fault he became a psycopath! heh! served steve right being closed to a deep freeze

anyway this story is worth reading coz it gives you another view about knives. it only shows that he still human... in emotion and reaction. his fate is a sad one and i shall mourn for him... love your story! keep it up!

Wow, how kaiwai! I just love the way you characterize Vash and Knives as children! _ Keep up the -way- spiffy work, Chibi-Jaimie! *grin*

Ja!

Juki-chan

That was sooo cute! I loved it! Could you add more? I would love it if you did!

Very, very nice, well written.

Awww... SWEET! I love it! Very kawaii and... um... Twinsy? Vash-and-Knives-y? Yeah. That's it. Cute fic!

awwww! How sweet! There aren't many fics that DON'T portray Knives as an evil d-i-c-k, so I'm glad that you wrote this. (Btw, is it me or does Meryl always seem a bit... snarky in your fics?)