Amazing! Just a fantastic story!

whoa. his ideals started off so heroic...then turned a little bit grey...and then so dark...

the subtle differences is awesome. the transition between one era to another is great! XD

Ever Reading

Tsuki

rather whimsical.

"wanna take over the world ?"

"sure"

xD

was hoping for something a bit darker ? maybe i'm stereotyping x.x

3/5

Very emotional and short. I like the repitition - it makes that phrases stand out and make it seem almost poetic.

The last line is very dramatic and well chosen.

I love how you show how the progression of Tom's intent. I is very easy to see how be became who he is in the books. Nice Job

I like this one shot too. You have a very nice flow to your work, and I anticipate reading more from your pen. :-)

Nice. Sometimes it's hard to remember it's V talking, not Potter.

Very well written!

I liked that. It honetly makes more sence that Tom wasn't the bully he was in HBP; that he thought he was doing the right thing.

This was okay. Interesting in general and I like how you always give a new perspective on characters and their lives.

Chilling, but sad. It's scary how easily the road to Hell can be paved by good intentions... Thanks for writing.

Cheers,

*LIZ

Such a powerful story. Full of sadness and anger and so inspiring...you're the greatest...!

That's sort of sad...How he himself became so corrupt in the end...