Whoa! that was really great and sad but I happy that TJ and Spinetti are togther! good job!

I love this!

Luv it! :)

Very cute!

so cute!

Brill! i loved it! i usually request a seqel, but no, thats fine on its own! keep up the good work! u were born to write recess fanfics!

that was the worst fanfic story i ever read

TT man that was so sad but beautiful I'm glad you wrote this now are you blanning to write a sequal to when they all get togetther or leave it? Well i dont know but plz do right another fic of recess i find it that your good at it. -

I have to admit, out of all the Recess fanfics I’ve seen, this one is definitely the best.

*Like your first kiss… I remember mine, TJ and I behind the jungle gym in fifth grade.

Technically, her and TJ kissed in fourth grade...

*I was head cheerleader, was dating the football captain, and getting asked to practically every party.

Mwah..I’m sure Ashley A was thrilled about that...

*Brittani, the hostess of the party was right behind him, she followed Bobby around like a little puppy dog. If I didn't know better I'd say they had something going on between the two of them.

Why would Spinelli care? You never said she was dating Bobby or does she have a crush on him or something? Wasn’t Brittani the name of the (original) Ashley’s kindergarten sisters

*"Spinelli," He looks at me. Oh, how I've long to hear my true name, "You're my friend. You will always be my friend. And nothing can change that."[...]I cry on his shoulder, clinging to probably the only friend I have in the world at the moment. "I love you."

Oh, now, that was just perfect. I loved the way you ended this.

Hmm..okay, I know you wrote this fic in 2001, but maybe you can either write a sequel or make this a chaptered fic. The next chapter can explain how the group split up, what made Spinelli become part of the Ashleys, when she realized that the life she was leaving wasn’t the life she wanted, and maybe (hopefully) throw in some romance with Spinelli and TJ. Or you could just lable this AU.

If you do continue, email me. There needs to be some good Recess stories somewhere and yours has potential.

Leaf

wow great story you should write a sequel.

beckie:)

THAT WAS REALLY GOOD! YOU SHOULD WRITE A SEQUAL WHERE THEY GO TO A HIGH SCHOOL REUNION OR SOMETHING! PLEASE DO! THANX! TATA

That was wonderful! I hope that you will write more 'Recess' fanfics in the future.

Umm...k...first off the story, even if it does take place in the future, is a bit off. Let's start with the basics. T.J. and Spinelli's first kiss was when they were in the 4th grade, in "The Experiment," in front of the whole school before classes started...not behind the jungle gym ('Old Rusty') in the 5th grade. Even though they didn't like it, it was still their first kiss. Even in the hypothetical world, Spinelli would never become an Ashley and would probably be the class dyke before wearing make-up and going to cheer practice. You made it too dramatic when the general story should be light-hearted. Lastly Gretchen would shoot MUCH MUCH higher than Yale. Otherwise you could be a good writer, just need to really know your characters and not invent these personalities they didn't develop on the show.

PLEASE! We don't wanna know about how Spinelli turned into an Ashley! Give more plot!

Make a sequel to this, pleasee. I want to know more about Teej and Spinelli, along with the rest of the gang. So update more chapts!