OH MY GOSH! I was like 'Awe this is so cute they finally have their first kiss' Until the part when she brings the sheet over his head. Ouch. That hurts. But so perfect. Excellent writing!

Ok, I certainly didn't see that coming! Here I was all ready for some GSR-lovin' and you went and killed him off! *Gah!* I actually gasped out loud when I got to that sneaky ending...

Despite this tragic twist in the story, it was so well written that I must applaud you anyways... good job, Wicca!

AMAZING! That was so sad, I want to cry. Really good though.. poor Sara..

Okay, this isn't Chicken, this is Samdum the Bouncing Hobbit (because I'm too lazy to log into my own account). I must rant.

HE'S DEAD? That is so NOT COOL! You can't kill Grissom! He's all Grissom-ish and he likes bugs! Grissom's the coolest old guy on TV that I know of! Except, of course, Doc Robbins. But, you must know, I am not a Sara/Grissom shipper. I strongly support the Catherine/Grissom faction. I read this because HannahCimsGwendolyn made me. But I loved it. I really did, it was so sweet. BUT YOU KILLED HIM! How DARE you kill Grissom? This was really really sweet up till the end. GRISSOM NEVER DIES!

Okay, I'm done ranting. Now for your regularly scheduled review:

OMG! This was so sweet! I pout for Sara. This is the only Sara/Grissom fic I've read that I like (I've read a total of about 15). I loved this fic. You should really keep writing stuff like this, only without the Grissom dying part. It's really sweet. Peace out.

Samdum

hey,

good chp! i really like it! Are you going to make it like a talking story or just like kind of a person reading Sara's mind or diary?

Painfully beautiful. I loved it and I don't even ship G/S.

wow. this is so good. i'm sorry, i don't have any other words to discribe how fantastic this is. it would be like a mockery to try.

You wrote it very good, but I wish I didn't read it. I really want to cry... It's so sad...

oh wow...very nice

Wow, very intense . . .very sad, but that made it all the more powerful!

-Hannah

Dude, you gotta mention that it's a character death. But it was good. I really enjoyed it!

That was so GOOD!

Great job. For having so few words, that story was very powerful. Great job.

Not...gonna...cry...

Very well written! I love all your stories!

This is excellent. Poignant, sensitive, and so unbearably sad. I would give you a rec on YTDAW but exposing the character death element completely kills the power of the last line. Terrific job.