Your words have enchanted me from the very beginning right to the end. I have tears in my eyes, woman! *shakes fist* Very, very late review, but I have enjoyed this immensely. Your words will stick with me for a long time :-)

Is that the pendant that Sir Didymus was keeping safe? How did it get to her?

YES!
This made me so much happier. I'm sticking with this epilogue. it's amazing. I've now completed your ENTIRE story and can't believe how much I LOVE IT!!

Can't wait to see what other stories you have up your sleeve.

THAT SUCKS! I mean, what the heck? They can't be together because of mere technicalities? BAH!
Eagerly awaiting the end..

Whoa! This just gets better and better with each chapter as we come to an end.

YES!
It's about time! They both finally admit that they love each other and now hopefully that mark will disappear from her arm.
Jareth is perfect!

very good and thrilling. towards the middle it kinda slowed down a bit but then it picked up. i am very glad i stayed up till 5 to read this. very good job. keep up the good work! Tootles^^

WHAT?
Just when I think that this story can't get any sadder or any more terrible for our couple, something new happens. Poor Jareth! Poor Sarah!

Oh come on! They're still arguing? Why won't Jareth and Sarah stop being so stubborn? BAH!

What has changed? What has changed?

Why did she faint? Exhaustion? What did she say while she was unconscious? Was it his name? Will Jareth take care of her? Or does he still hate her?
BAH! I have to keep reading! I'm so hooked!

You are so good at cliffhangers.

Does this mean that Jareth is finally going to suck it up and realize that Sarah is meant for him?

Can't help it! The romantic in me is still hoping for something to change with them.

Found some mistakes in grammar but they're minor and unimportant. The only criticism I have is that the number of years Sarah has been gone changed a few times thruout the story. At one point I think it was even three, not five as you originally stated and the Goblin King seemed to think it was four. I don't know if you did this on purpose, like time runs differently in the Labyrinth, but it did break up the flow of the story a little bit.
Otherwise this story is fantastic, unbelievably good. Maybe one of the best stories I've read that isn't a published work. I knew it was a good story when I stayed up until 3 in the morning just wanting to read a little bit more, know what happens next. I don't know if you've ever taken writing classes but you have a very good grasp of what makes a good story, even shifting over to a secondary plot to keep things fresh.

I look forward to reading the rest of your fics and anything else you may write in the future.

I really thought that the talisman would somehow make it able for Sara to live in the Underground. Like it would make her immortal like Jareth or something. Hmpf...I still love it though.

and I have to say that I love that you ended it with the lyrics. My heart just went pitter pat! :D

LUDO DIED? And poor Jareth! What's going to happen?