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Gining
2008-09-03 . chapter 26
You finally finished! That's makes me so happy! Though I did have to go back and reread that last chapter, Emi-chan. You waited too long.

I only have one other complaint. At once point you have Auron greet Rikku and reach to make sure some "object" was still in his pocket... You wanna fill us in on what that was? Maybe a one-shot saying it? maybe, maybe, maybe?

But you did a fine job wrapping everything up. Except for that one thing, I saw no open endings that needed more. Gin~
mandyfanforevr
2008-09-02 . chapter 26
Thanks for finishing the story. Happy ending but... you never touched on what happened with that thing that was supposed to kill Zarinia. Oh well.
Ygfi
2008-09-02 . chapter 26
only the conclusion left now eh? this story is comming to an end.
make it a good ending, and try not to take as long as this one took.
BlackDeath6
2008-09-01 . chapter 26
i loved this chapter. i liked all the different views and perspectives. i'm glad you decided not to abandon this. I would have had to set up an angry mob to chase you everywhere you went. angry mobs are so hard to come by these days. anyhoo, great story.
Digiari
2008-09-01 . chapter 26
My goodness, it's about time, m'dear. I'm more than glad to see this story completed. Also, who doesn't love the good sappy endings? You pulled it off very well. :)

Keep writing! Your reviwers and I love to see your productions. ^.^

-Ari
KathleenDee
2008-09-01 . chapter 26
sniffles , that was awsomme, i remember reading Vacation Time and Wedding Time...a while ago lol I'm glad you decided to finish it, it was great :)
KathleenDee
2007-12-30 . chapter 25
OMG no, well i guess it had to be done...but still. i love the Wakka and Lulu moments of the story :) please please please update
Integrated Data Thought Entity
2007-11-07 . chapter 25
Please write more. Oh and the disclaimer thing, just write it on your profile. I did that. Seems OK
Digiari
2007-05-25 . chapter 25
Amazing! I love your stories.

I submitted a review for "Vacation time" saying that I was looking forward to reading the sequel; let me just point out that I was not dissapointed. For a moment I thought you were going to kill off Auron, but then I thought, "Nah. Auron's to cool to die from battle, even if he was protecting Rikku."

Your writing flows, you write great fight scenes, and I envy you.

~AriEli
chibikyu
2007-04-18 . chapter 3
I believe that this is a very good story but i highly suggest that u use spell check often and reread what you wrote.
Ygfi
2007-03-08 . chapter 25
well, it was good, but its sort of... boring? might be me, its late here.

-the ugger
mandyfanforevr
2007-02-24 . chapter 25
Wow, long chapter. Dramatic too. I guess Zarinia's fate is finally sealed, though it seemed she was doomed from the start. Unless you have some big twist in the final chapter... guess I'll have to wait and see. Try not to take too long!
Gining
2007-02-24 . chapter 25
Words can't even begin to say what I thought about this chapter. But shall we try anyway?
It was like a rollercoaster ride. One moment it would seem as if everything was going to get better, then you changed it up and it got worse. Though you did a nice job throwing some humor in there. It helped to bring it down once more so that it wasn't all doom and gloom and end of the heros thing. And no you couldn't tell it was forced at all. You did a wonderful job. But now I'm going to be wondering what happens to Z now! She saved them, they have to like her, but you killed her...maybe. She helped them, you can't kill her. Think of Brother! Think about how depressed he would be!! Don't do that to him. Gin~ (but you still kinda killed her, so I got my original vote to see her death)
BlackDeath6
2007-02-23 . chapter 25
OMG! that was...wow. i cant wait to find out what happens next. i hate cliffhangers, they're evil anyways. i hope zarinia survives. she did protect auron and rikku. that has to count for something.
Moonlitesadness
2007-02-23 . chapter 25
That was an amazing chapter.

Griping: I can't believe how long it took you, but this chapter was so worth the wait.

The...er..."dropped" line: THAT WAS FANTASTIC! I adore your writing. You are so very talented. Though it's sorta depressing that there is only one more chapter left. Will there be a sequel to this one? Because if Auron and Rikku do ever get engaged, will it be in the next chapter? Or do you plan on just letting our imaginations wonder? Well so many questions, and only one more chappy. Well update soon...*Gives angry glare*

Loev ya and God Bless! *Smiles sweetly*
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