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| Slash4Femme 2008-03-29 ch 1,  | abuseCute :~) |
| tnnurse 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseloved your story!! |
| kateg123 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abusewow I loved this the last line was great. =) |
| oval 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abuseThat last line was a killer. It was the perfect way to end the story. And your characterizations were spot-on. Really, really good job! |
| BlackIceNinja 2006-12-28 ch 1, | abusenice ending line... |
| mary2000 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abuseI hope that you update this story soon I want to see how things are going for Nick and Greg! |
| kelticsgirl 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abusewhat no grapic sex scene??:( the first time and no play by play description how disappointing... |
| SarcasmIsMe 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuselol i loved it. haha the ending made me laugh more than anything. “Nicky,” he said quietly. “I put out on the first date.” |
| Danielle Elenauial 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abuseHeehee, I liked where this was going, why it end? Haha. WOOHOO! The Goonies!! That's where it's AT! Great story. :-D |
| Nizuno Mikomi 2006-03-09 ch 1, | abuseNow that was pretty. Couldn't ask for a better ending line either. Very good job at portraying the nervousness and insecurity of the whole situation without getting too girly. Very believable and very enjoyable. Nicely done! |
| Daaf 2005-11-30 ch 1, | abuseGr! It was amazing, but you gotta explain to me: I'm from Holland and my English sucks, so what does the last scentence mean? Help help help. I want to know, cos the rest was so good! Loved it. Please write more! x lauwie |
| ShyeMyst 2005-10-08 ch 1, | abuseVery good! Enjoyed it!It needs to be a little longer! Great last line... But seriously you worked so hard to get to this point and it's like you almost got there... Oh well I guess I will take it and say good job! ^_^ |
| kom 2005-09-13 ch 1, | abuseit was very cute, i liked the progression, but i think it would have been better a little longer, so you could shore MORE of the progression and in better detail. however, maybe i'm just upset cause it ended too soon. it was very cute, very well written, i enjoyed it a lot! -K |
| BashirXena 2005-08-27 ch 1, | abuseThat's pretty much the best last line I've ever read. I almost fell out of my chair. Good story. |
| Cathleen18 2005-08-27 ch 1, | abuse*giggles* Just what I needed. A little fluff to get me through a packet of Jaffa Cakes. Yummy! ctx :D |