I know there's a sequel, but... that still seems to be such an odd ending... so... *unfinished*. Oh well, ONWARD!

~ Umbrae

I know Link's the one that has been physically brutalized, but I feel sorry for Sheik. Only someone who has been faced against such horrors as Ganon has forced upon him could have done that... poor, poor Sheik.

That's a great plot-thread, though. I mean, really - WOW! Passionate!

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write. Read. Dream.

aw... a fluffy ending ^^ i really enjoyed this fanfic. The ending as well. It was happy, at the same time, there was a bit of ominousity with the way sheik said "we'll see, we'll see" to Link's "nothing will separate us".

I look forward to reading the sequal ^^

The ending's kinda... untied. Loose-endy.

But other than that, I loved it.
GO LINKSHEIK! WOT!

I am very confused with this chapter. Why did Sheik do that?

wow this was cute. i hope you finish the second one soon. the chapters were a little short though, and maybe a bit more detail could have been added in the area of Lin's actual quest. i mean, there are some you get where the writer is like 100% focused on the quest and nothing else, and those are boring, but i think at least mentioning more than a few fragments would be nice. maybe i'm wrong though. maybe you were trying to concentrate on the relationship more.

i like this story very much. but i must admit that the whips and chains chapter caught me off guard; didn't expect Shiek to act that way. but it was interesting. this story i like very much, and i look forward to further chapters ^_^

This is good, but it kinda got more rushed as you went along.

-confused-

What is with Sheik and the disappearing??

This is good.

you know I never did get that horse and have given up, stuck on the water temple, but anyways good fic.

wow high on the drama, but I like it.

Well written, it's been a while since I've read something like this. Link and Sheik kinda seem like Leon and Cloud from KH onl less stocic [thats not spelled right, I know.]

I like this so much better than the game.