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| Elf 2005-08-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseLovely - but ACK! More! I agree with the writing of longer pieces comment...but longer Tim/Gavin! I'm guessing you had a whole backstory in your head when you wrote this, so please, write it down! Or at least mail me and talk about it :) T/G is a pairing I could talk about forever. |
| Jennifer 2005-08-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like your style of writing...and, of course, with my being a Brittas fanatic, your subject matter. Well structured, punctuated, all that jazz. Just one thing niggles...why not write longer pieces? I think you could do a really good, in-depth character study on a day at Whitbury. I also think you could do a mean Laura/Brittas Fic. Please consider that one...you'd make my week! :-) |
| jellyjam rabbit 2005-08-26 ch 1, | abuseaw nice!There are so many timgavin ones on here. thank you for reviwing my fic. i dare YOU TO WRITE A BOOSH ONE! |