 Queen of the Paperclips 2009-06-18 . chapter 10I am in love with this pairing and wish more people wrote about the intricacies that are Tomoyo and Touya. Thanks for some lovely oneshots revolving around them. |
 0jaz0 2009-06-12 . chapter 4lol, the brat got in an accident :P
this was a cute one :] |
 0jaz0 2009-06-12 . chapter 3thats scary.
wow. Disturbing more like it.
lol, yes obsessed I call it :P |
 0jaz0 2009-06-12 . chapter 1aww. Very cute story :] |
 Mooncatcher 2009-03-07 . chapter 10I think you've really amazingly written everything. You've characterized Tomoyo and Touya really well, and your vignettes seem to fit their relationship perfectly. ;) |
 Rebecca Pierce 2008-12-21 . chapter 10I thought this was beautifully written. I love vignettes and one-shots and yours certainly didn't disappoint! ^_^ |
 Halfsmile 2008-09-27 . chapter 10A few things come to mind:
1)aww, that is so sweet~
2)So this is the end of your Rainy Day series, or is 'The End' just part of your taunt/joke with L-chan?
3)The ending is not half-assed. i like it.
4)Try to write without ellipses. It's difficult but it improves your writing to learn to leave the feeling that a phrase or sentence is trailing off by the words themselves rather than by a symbol. |
 Halfsmile 2008-09-27 . chapter 9"that would have undoubtedly thrown Sakura-chan into eye-swirling confusion"
is a great line. When i imagine that i see a cute image. If you are familiar with Spinda from Pokemon Emerald you may understand what i'm thinking of.
i really admire your description of Touya. |
 Hotgirlow 2008-06-17 . chapter 10i so can't waitt illt his is updatd i really liked it. |
 Adeen 2008-05-14 . chapter 10I loved it! So that was the offical ending or ending for now? Loved it either way. I have always loved this story. You made me love this pairing very much! |
 frozen tears 2008-05-14 . chapter 10i'm seriously lovin your fic! i love all the cuteness between Touya and TOmoyo. thanks for continuing to write about a couple that not a lot of people write about! i love this couple!
nice job.
oh and i agree with ur comment about L-chan...i gave up...but her livejournal has a lot more fics i think. |
 Ron and his Sakura 2008-05-12 . chapter 10haha, have to agree with u on that waiting for Shadows. i don't think she's going to make the effor tho. le sigh...
but thanks for the txt one-shots here. i do enjoy them :)
-hS |
 Goshikku Seirei 2008-05-12 . chapter 10You rock. Definitely. I love these things you write. Tomouya makes me a whole lot better. I love you for this.
Btw, couldn't help but notice... Uhm... About dedicating this fic for L-chan... Are you talking about the 'Shadows' fic?? Because if you are, we're on the same page. I'm going gaga over that fic.
Its good you're still around!! Now please write more!! hahaha!! Great job!! XD |
 infiniteternity 2008-05-11 . chapter 10hahaha, you're the only author I can find who fulfills my urges for TXT so beautifully ^_^
Chapter 9 was so utterly beautiful and simplistic. Chapter 10 on the other hand is mush more whimsical and charming. Both of them are wonderful. Both of them are soo frustrating to read because of their "lovely" endings >_<
Thank you for all of your hard work and dedication. Please continue soon? |
 madteen66 2007-12-16 . chapter 8oh this one's nicee.. |