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Rebel Goddess
2006-05-18
ch 1,
abuseNow I'm imagining the looks on all the marines' faces if Daniel had a limb that he called Jack. Funny but probably a really bad idea. Good beginning.
Watcher.mine
2006-01-27
ch 9,
abuseAll I can say is: About dang TIME someone wrote a decent aside for season 9! I was going insane with Jack/Daniel interaction withdrawal. This fic takes the edge off a bit, at least.
Please do continue, I'd love to see your take on these new episodes. Cheers!
Shakia
2005-11-22
ch 9,
abuseOh. My. Gosh. I totally still love this story, always so amazing! :D I look forward to every update, you totally do perfectly with Daniel and Jack and their relationship. Total brilliance on your part, I totally adore how your doing this! :) Can't wait for an update, thanks so much for writting this! :D
Tempest in Blue
2005-11-19
ch 9, anon.
abuseI love it. This is SO good--going on my fave stories list for sure. :-)
angw
2005-11-15
ch 9,
abuseThanks for the wonderful scene fillers. I laughed and was sad in all the appropriate places...it was great :D
whisper99
2005-11-15
ch 9,
abuseThese were great! Thanks for sharing!
Malic sign
2005-09-17
ch 7, anon.
abuseI love this fic! it's currently my favorite (though for how long, I cannot say).
all I know is, daniel and jack were made for each other. I am also fully aware that carter may have to be eliminated *loads gun*.
manic
2005-09-17
ch 7, anon.
abuse'-
Daniel was lost in thought, listening as the broken glass crunched under his feet when he was suddenly pulled into another room.
“Tell me. Tell me it’s not true” his captor demanded.

Daniel stretched his neck, trying to ease the grip on his shoulders. “I’m sorry…but it is.” he answered seriously. “The new release for your Xbox has been delayed.”

Jack glared and let his friend go. “Of all the…” he started angrily, then raised his fist as if wanting to strike something. “He’s on my planet!” he pointed aggressively at himself. “He’s breathing my air! He’s eating my deep-fried donuts and he’s drinking my homogenized milk! The nerve of that whining, weaseling, arrogant little…!” '

LOL!
manic
2005-09-17
ch 6, anon.
abuseShe cried out his name, begging him to help her…to save her, but all he could do was watch. Watch and beg and swallow the bile that continuously rose to the back of his throat as their captors held him helplessly in place.

“You have to believe me! You’re killing an innocent person!” he cried and pleaded, but they would not hear him, they would not stop. And the fires consumed her.

“Noo! No!”

That was pretty darn intense. And they never seemed to mention it again. I'm glad you did. I also loved how Jack left Danny for "ONE minute!" and got ditched while going to the john *snicker*
manic
2005-09-17
ch 5, anon.
abuseThank god you allow anonymous reviews :) I really like this, and the other chapters. I also think that the show is a little hollow when it comes to Jack and the team. But this chapter really reflected my feelings about the Ori. I don't like the Ori because... what's the use? They are too powerful. It would be too overwhelming to deal with just them all season. The first couple episodes had me worried that that is just what would happen. Luckily, other subjects were brought up. I LOVE that they brought in Ba'al! Ok, I'm rambling here. Bye, look forward to reading more, and thanks for sharing.
Nighshae
2005-09-16
ch 7,
abuse(Shaking head while ROTFL) Very good, keep it up! :D
Shakia
2005-09-06
ch 6,
abuseWow, that was so awesome! Great job with everything, really, this is definatly going into my favorites! :D I very much agree as well! ^^ Great job again! :D
fischergirl
2005-09-05
ch 6,
abuseI'm glad someone's finally addressed how bummed everyone would be about being split up! I totally thought Jack would go insane from doing paperwork and not being in the field. I'm still mad he's not in the show, but I'm glad you've still got him keeping an eye out for his team!
DragonChaos
2005-08-31
ch 6,
abuseI really like the angle you're taking with this story. Daniel and Jack always seemed like such good friends, but no one really delves into it too much without making it slash...but I like their relationship this way.

You're doing really well with the characterizations. I had fun reading this...Looking forward to more! :)
Lisel
2005-08-30
ch 6, anon.
abuseYAY! Keep updating! I love it when Jack gets all worried and overprotective. I also loved it that he swatted Daniel on the shoulder for worrying him. ^_^ You write some of the best fanfics - the friendship showm here is so undeniable and deep. Update super soon if you can - I know you'd be making a bunch of fans happy - I know you'd be making my day
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