OMG! that was so funny! especially McDonald's! except what were they laughing about? and what did Erek write? Can you do a chapter 4 him? He's my fave character. Great job! Keep it up!

Interesting. I liked it, especially the last one. The first one could really become a whole story or something. Also, HOW DID YOU GET THE ARROWS? Ff.n /never/ lets me (and others) put those. Drives me crazy!

Wow! I love them! They're brilliant! So short, yet so intense! My fave had to be 'Distractions' - I laughed out loud when I read Jake's serious comment. And McDonalds is good, kinda sums up the whole of each of the chracter's personalites. I could write about how much i liked all of them, but can i just say this - write more! Please!!

I loved them. All of them. But my favorite one is McDonald's 3:36 p.m. It's like a condensed version of the entire series, a perfect way of illustrating the balance Jake struggled to achieve for himself and the others. Really, really good.

The first one was incredible. You just feel this sense of dread as the scene goes on, but I loved how despite the short length it didn't feel rushed or incomplete.

I hope you keep posting your drabbles!

this is great!
wonderful work!
well... keep it up! :D