  Fire-ofthe-Sun 2008-07-16 . chapter 6I love this story, but you haven't updated in forever! Update soon!! |
| Remy's Writer 2008-04-02 . chapter 1 Pita bread is so good. It's awesome for sandwhiches and wraps and stuff. If you've never had it, I totally suggest it. The little bit of Greek food I've gotten to try was actually pretty tastey. ^^
I've never had Hawaiian, though... |
| Lady of Spring Rain 2008-01-21 . chapter 6 Thank you for writing an amazing story...and then ditching it. C'mon and update will ya? It's too good to abandon like this... |
| lvswtht 2008-01-03 . chapter 6 Love this story. I love the Warren/Layla ship because Will is a bit of an idiot. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Crayon-Snob 2008-01-02 . chapter 6 I like it thus far, although at first Magenta's added power seemed a bit far-fetched for me, you're making it work. It's good, and I'm especially enjoying the interplay between Layla and Warren. |
| jadedmidnite 2007-10-08 . chapter 6 There is a sad lack of Warren/Layla fics, especially longer ones, so I really hope that you plan on continuing this one. I really like where you're going with it so far and can't wait to see where you take this next. |
| fell for the stupid love song 2007-09-11 . chapter 6 Great story! I hope you keep it up. |
| Fire-Starter90 2007-08-19 . chapter 4 Well for the name Alala Peace, if you say it supper fast I guess it could be Alata Peace, which is A lot of peace, just like Warren Peace being War and Peace. |
| thecutiedisease 2007-08-13 . chapter 1 This is really, really good. The Warren/Layla moments are so cute! |
| Le Pain Perdu 2007-06-16 . chapter 6 You are evil. EVIL. Ah. Okay...update? I really like this story. Its one of the few WarrenLayla fics on here worth reading...hehhe. Keep it up! |
| Cerdwyn3 2007-06-13 . chapter 6 you are anything but innocent! lol great update love the story ^_^ |
| John cena punk princess 2007-06-11 . chapter 2 this is getting good... |
| John cena punk princess 2007-06-11 . chapter 1 hm i think they like each other there just in denile about it.
I love this story! by the way, just thaught i'd let you know that. |
| TheDreamerLady 2007-06-09 . chapter 6 Oh, it has been a long time. I'd nearly forgotten about this one.
Anyway, I hope you don't need as much time to write the next story chapter! Though, I do like this one.
Have fun!
amanda and Lanco(the duck) |
| BiteMeGirl388 2007-06-01 . chapter 6 I like it. It works. But this latest chapter was severely lacking in Warren/Layla Action.
I like how you actually researched the terminology. I do a lot of Independant Study in Parapsychology, so it irks me when people use terms like "Elemental" and "Fire Bender."
-BMG
PS: here's a fun fact; really powerful psychics can change the color of their hair/clothes/makeup at will, as well as those of others, basically altering the chemical properties of matter. I figured that it'd be a useful bit of info since you chose Magenta to be a psychic. She and Warren could both make great use of that particular quirk. :D |
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