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Thorn of Lily 2006-05-01 ch 10,	abuseHmm... Me was thinking... Make something about Shizuru... hmm. She has a secret she can't tell Kuwa, 'cause it would "ruin his life" or soemthing... and it's basically killing her inside. What do you say, Allie-chan? And I'm sending you an e-mail. -cries- it's been so long since we last talked...
miyako14 2005-11-01 ch 10,	abuseLovely chapter, can't resist the Kurama torture, can you? Well, whatever, it's fun to read. I am incredibly sorry I haven't reviewed sooner, but school's a bitch. Also, I have a terrible cold or something, and now all the make up work from school. But don't worry, I'm back! Anyway, keep up the fabulous work, and update soon! ^_^
Nyte Kit 2005-10-26 ch 10,	abuseyou really have a knack for taking an idea and making it far better than i even imagined. you did wonderfully on this one. i think i like it even better than my first one you wrote. i loved how you included the Janen Ju, too! i had completely forgotten about that particular plant. and to have him trapped in his own device, ingenious! wonderful descriptions and feelings in this chapter, as well. i could practically see poor Kura's pain, and it was lovely. wonderful job!!
Aika-chan (FBR) 2005-10-26 ch 10, anon.	abuseWAH! (currently grounded...can't login -_-) That's so evil. Way. Need to torture other characters though. nodnod Kuwa, Yukina, Hiei, 'Suke, Shizuru, any others. Hmm... nodnod me has no ideas right now.
miyako14 2005-10-20 ch 9,	abuseWow, you're deranged. It was interesting and well written though. If I ever come up with a good idea, you'll be the first to know. By the way, have you ever read the book Battle Royale? I think you'd really like it. Anyway, love the fic, keep up the fabulous work! ^_^
Thorn of Lily 2005-10-19 ch 9,	abuseWahahahha! Oh well. Not really what I was expecting (though I think you told me about it ... hmm...) But damn good. And me feeling like ranting. Today my math teacher (head over hells for math I tell you O.o) told us about Chaos theory. Something about a guy finding out that without the movement of a butterfly's wing the earth would have a powerfull earthquake. Oh well. So, in little words, Youko saved himself. XD Unintentionally created his new body. ... He does have some claim over it. ...I love you too ^^...
Nyte Kit 2005-10-19 ch 9,	abusenice nice nice! i loved it! i too love the pairing of Kurama with his own mother, but you took it to a new extreme. it's so awesome how you had him be his own father for the human world. that was really cool! also, you wrote this really well. i loved all the descriptions and mystery you put into it. great job! oh, and the ending was spectacular. update soon with another please!
taku-chans 2005-10-16 ch 8, anon.	abusei HATE kurama torture scenes. but that's okay it was written well anyway, so... keep it up, ne? buh bye!
Nyte Kit 2005-10-14 ch 8,	abusewow. oh my gosh! that was simply amazing! i officially love you for writing this, and Mana for coming with this idea. you wrote this so beautifully. it just flowed so well. you have amazed me yet again with this. and take this as a huge compliment: i do not like the death sentence AT ALL, but you made this story with it so well that i couldn't help but enjoy it. and now, you've got my gears rolling for another one. since my fetish is Kurama torture, it shall include that, of course (which you should enjoy). now, let's see, Kurama does something really evil in his human body, such as killing Yusuke and Kuwabara (whether of his own free will or by force is up to you). because of this, he is captured by Koenmato be sentenced for his crimes. the punishment will be along the lines of torture for eternity but worse. more like he'd go from the hands of one of his enemy to the next being tortured as they see fit without the privelege of dying. also, Hiei will be one of the enemies because Kurama killing teammates goes against his honor code, and Yomi will be included as one as well. i also want Kurama to go through emotions, like from being nonchalant to being fearful and remorseful. you can describe this however you want, write it from whatever POV you want, and change a few of the details. just make the gist of the story follow that line. and if you think of something you think would work in it, but it's kinda off from my description, go ahead and use it. you have to have some room to work, right?
miyako14 2005-10-13 ch 8,	abuseWow, that was really cool, I love it! He gets hung, that just seems so weird, but I suppose it is a different culture. Anyway, it was a fabulous story, I can't wait to read the next one, so keep up the inspiring (new word!) work! ^_^
Le Random Lady-Person 2005-10-12 ch 8,	abuseI can't help but grin at Kurama's misfortune... starts laughing I enjoyed that. nod
miyako14 2005-10-05 ch 7,	abuseReally interesting chapter, I never really thought about things from Mitarai's POV or anything. It's well written for a character they didn't a lot of backround or a lot of appearences. I'll give you a request as soon as I think of one, but I'm not so great at the thinky-thinking. Anyway, keep up the work! ^_^
Nyte Kit 2005-10-05 ch 7,	abusenice chapter. i've never read a fic with Mitari as the main character myself, but i think you did a good job. he seems like the same Mitari from the show, at least. and all of the allusions to water worked out very well. i also enjoyed his musings and everything in this, about his pain and how he handles it. it was pretty darn good. i'll try to think of another topic to help this fic not go on hiatus, because it's pretty good reading all these different fics wrapped into one. update soon! (and thanks for the go ahead!)
Thorn of Lily 2005-10-05 ch 7,	abuseWhee! The normal life of an excluded teenager. nodnod Me knows that well.
Thorn of Lily 2005-10-04 ch 6,	abuseWai! ...O.o bloody. Yes, yes, very bloody. I was afraid with Yukina's piece T.T She was scary. Wai. Weird prologue. nodnod Weird. But understandable. And scary Kara-kun. Poor Kura. nodnod Bye!

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