I Have a good idea for an sequal to this fanfic if whnt the details email me as

I've always been a Keitaro/Mutsumi fan and it's difficult finding a well written one. This is a nice angsty/fluffy piece to at least satisfy my craving for this pairing. It is a nicely written, sometimes sappy/tender story. I really enjoyed it.
Just want to wish you good luck on your studies...

Well this was a nice Keitaro/Mutsumi fic. I liked the characterization here in particular along with some of the introspective parts. Wouldn't surprise me if Naru had divorced Keitaro after a while actually, since I'm a cynical weirdo (who will probably be hounded by rabid Naru fans for typing this).

I felt this was a poor pic. might give you some credit for the effort but the storyline is really poor. Rating 1.5/10

Brillant.

But I did notice the language deteriorating in some sections. Or maybe i'm imagining things.

Anyway, I think the 'joined as one' part was a bit unclear. Do you mean physically or mentally?

Its still a great piece of work.

It`s good to read a new story about the greatest couple from Love Hina. I`m waiting for new stories from you, pal!

Very well done, and showing the growth the characters would have taken to get there.

Well done.

Innortal

This fic turned out to be good. It didn't seem so rushed to me. Also, I'm glad that you're trying to get back to writing fan fiction. Your fic Sakura Kisses is one of my favorites. I love good Keitaro/Mutsumi fics and yours have been some of the best!

Definetly this story goes to my favourite stories list.
Keit/Muts Fan Here!

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

I do like what you written. It does make since cannon-wise that if it never worked out between Naru and Keitaro that Mutsumi would be the one to capture his heart. Write on and you shall always have an audience.