Dark, powerful, incredibly well written and painfully true.

Another great, well thought out piece of writing! Very intriguing and powerful to read! I just wonder where you come up with all your ideas!

Forceful, realistic, with great characterization of Zack and Max. Keep up the fine work.

Good story, I enjoyed it. Its good to see why Zack does what he does. I just which Max would see things through his eyes and leave Logan... (sorry cant help it :o) )