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| OrangeRanger4Eva 2005-10-04 ch 5, anon. | abuseOH MY GOD!YOU MADE THE SECOND MOST HOTTEST GUY(HUNTER),I REPEAT,THE SECOND MOST HOTTEST BOY(TOMMY OLIVER BEING THE HOTTEST)Gay?No-offence,likes,but never have I read a story like it.As long as you're happy,though.Great Story.Keep writing.See Ya! BYE! Love, OrangeRanger4Eva! |
| Elfsong 2005-09-24 ch 5,  | abuseThat was great! I guess you really didn't need to tell it from Hunter's POV, did you? Are you planning any follow-ups to this? Like maybe how Blake deals with the news when Hunter calls him? It could be an interesting new take on that. Anyway, great story and idea! |
| the real vampire 2005-09-24 ch 5, | abuseOh wow, that was so so good!! I felt really bad for Hunter - I just wanted to hug him! Great ending!! |
| Crimson-Ranger 2005-09-23 ch 5, | abuseAwe...cute-ness..great job. :D |
| garnetred 2005-09-23 ch 5, | abuseExcellent story. I am glad that the nightmare is finally over for Hunter. Please write soon. |
| Sreym 2005-09-23 ch 5, | abuseThis is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read! This last chapter was SO sad! I loved it. You went through the dream so well, and I like how it was from Cam watching instead of Hunter in it. And the reference to Miko was really sad too, it fit in really well. Loved the ending too, how everything wasn't perfect suddenly but it was still okay. Great chapter and awesome story! Can't wait for the next one! |
| BJvision 2005-09-23 ch 5, | abuseThis was just heart wrenching. I didn't expect this the trauma of his parents wow. Well written the entire set up and all. Can't wait to read TimeStorm. Will it have elements of your H/C world or an entirely fresh background. |
| cmar 2005-09-23 ch 5, | abuseWow, even though I've read this before I had tears in my eyes. While the subject of Hunter's dream wasn't a huge surprise, the power of the emotions involved was very convincingly done, and Hunter's trauma was both believable and very touching. The aspects of Cam's feelings about his mother being brought out and Hunter's protectiveness of Blake really rounded it out - and of course, a great, romantic ending. Beautiful! And thanks for the lovely thank-you! |
| CamFan4Ever 2005-09-23 ch 5, | abuseIt's over so soon?? *Pouts* I'm sad that its over but it was excellent girl! Love how you also mentioned Miko in it, nice touch. Looking forward to the Ninja Storm/Time Force crossover, since it's not up yet...seeing how its only 6:35 AM here in Indy. Oh well, at least I have something to look forward to reading after school. |
| AngelMouse5 2005-09-23 ch 5, | abuseAn excellent way to finish this story my friend, really well done. I love how you described Hunter seeing what he did when he was that young was exactly what I thought it would be... and the emotion conveyed by both of them was so well done, so beautiful that it was awesome.. well done |
| Weesta 2005-09-22 ch 5, | abuseOH MY GOSH! Dany, I love you! This was awesome. I was so tense and really worried about Hunter's reaction to his dream. I was pretty sure I knew what was coming, but wow, it was intense. The description of Hunter in the Lazy Boy was perfect! Your descriptions of everyone Hunter, Cam and Kanoi during the hypnosis had me in tears! Oh, so sad! And so beautifully written! I just...oh! Great, great job! You make me love Hunter so much! And Cam! Do you see? I'm practically incoherent! Awesome job! |
| Funky In Fishnet 2005-09-19 ch 4, | abuseVery cool interesting couple of chapters, the idea for Sensei's hypnosis skills are very believable. Keep it up :- ) |
| the real vampire 2005-09-19 ch 4, | abuseNo don't leave it there! Great chapter, I can't wait to see what this dream is all about!! Please update soon! |
| garnetred 2005-09-18 ch 4, | abuseI am so glad that Hunter is willing to go through with this. It should be interesting what this dream is that has Hunter so scared. Excellent story and please update soon. |
| Elfsong 2005-09-17 ch 4, | abuseYay! You updated! And it was Sensei... Cool. I love this chapter and can't wait for the next one. Are you going to give an in-depth account of The Dream from Hunter's POV or Sensei and Cam's POV of what Hunter looks like while going through it? Or both... Both would be neat. Anyway, please update again soon! ^^ |