This was hot. My god, I would die if I was writing this, how did you do it!? Haha, but this was really descriptive, I love it.

Hahaha that was good. :D I hope you keep doing more one-shots!
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damn i'm not one for reading one-shots but this was amazing! Just the way it all flowed so naturally, I luved this! Excellent job writing this I enjoyed it all the way!

who's the uke? sasuke or naruto?

I loved it!

I loved it,and I so agree. Naruto is sexy under all those clothes. Keep up the good work.^_^

Jeez maddie (summonermomo) sound deserate much? hehe

Anyway I really love it! Your work is so awesome.

oh lordy i love you. gorgeously detailed. and...gah i dunno what else to say. more? please? I would definately be in favor of you doing some quick KH or FFXII/FFXI scenes as well. maybe a bit of Gravitation? haha sorry i'll shut up. love it though.

This was great, I give props to you!

That was good. I liked it at least.

>_< wtf i read it and then left the page and now it's telling me the chapter can't be found... I JUST READ IT FFNET YOU IDIOTS!

hehe anyway... wonderful! even if you couldn't resist keeping it as a one-shot :p WEAK! hehe :p

0.0 ...erm... not quite what i expected... gets a little explicit up there... i better be careful what i read... one of my siblings might decide to peek in and that would be BAD! lol! funny ending! XD

Wow. That is one of the sweetest fan fics i have read. good job!

lol that's awesome...it's fun catching ppl going at it they like turn tomato red and get nervous. ^-^

EVIL! Sexy foreplay, though. BUT EVIL. You had to add it. ONE WORD. One word and you earned my wrath. *takes one of Neo's pitchforks* And wrathy it is. Other than that, wonderful.