i love this story. there is literally NO story of yours that i've read that i did NOT like. I love your character studies in particular, the way you inhabit the person's mind and heart. so true to who they are. i try to do the same thing in my stories, but in my opinion, you are better at it. i so hope that you write more.

Excellent, this was very accurate and you really added some closure to both Rinoa's and Squall's personalities.. good job.

*sniff* I cried! -o-;;; That was so very deep, I loved it! I am inspired...*sniff*

thats was sweet! i think that is just what rinoa felt! i really do! that was just sooo cute!

*sniff* that was pretty darn good...

Oh wow, that brought tears to my eyes. It's a really nice fic and i like the way you wrote. Keep it up! .

Wow! What an awesome look into Rinoa's head! Awesome fic! Will there be a sequel? Please say yes, please say yes, PU-LEASE say yes! Keep up the good work and write more!

Beautiful...

There is nobody like you...How you capture the characters is just amazing. From start to finish you just seem to see deep into what they are thinking. When I was playing this part of the game, this is exactly what I think Rinoa thought of Squall. When she vowed to not give up on Squall... wonderful. I loved this.

this is really great!...you've described squall to perfection. i like the narrative thing with rinoa too.

wow... that's really great... you really captured Squall's cold and aloof character to perfection

Great writing style as well

You know there are reasons why I love your work Astarte. :) I've already read this I think, but I still absolutely ADORE it. You capture the characters so well, and almost all your stories are just SO deep! Keep up the good work, I really hope to see more from you soon! :-)