Wow, simply wow. You are probably the one of the first Hatori/Shigure writers (besides Laily) that has taken the Akkigure relationship into account, and has not just simply ignored it. Major, MAJOR kudos to you for this. This makes you writing the pairing even more of a pleasure to read.

I love your Shigure. Adorable, sweet, self-sacrificing- GUH. Am in love. Can't wait for more.

Hey Moki! Long time no talk! =D Finally updated I se...and it took me forever to realize this. Mah bad. xDD

But yeah, life is a **, agreeable...but you just gotta go through with it, I guess.

By the way, nice chapter. I think the end was cute with the children and the whole, "come see Daddy Shigure" thing? funneh.xD

Can't wait till the next!

You are so sweet and kind,thank you!
the lemon was very good,graphic but not vulgar.
This chapter is sad.
She loves him,he loves her,but they don't will be together(cry)
I wish Akito would be pregnant,even if Shigure will stay with Hatori,so she can have someone to love.
01September...ok ^-^
thank you very much!

Yay! Moki Updated! WHO!

Great job! Duh! (I'm hyper, sorry)

It's been a while. I should really update mine too, shouldn't I?

Oops, better get started! (scrambles)

Does Shigure really love Hatori,or Akito?
Maybe he did sleept with Hatori out of friendship,pity and worry...
Hatori is stronger by now,or would he breaks if Shigure did left?
I'm such an Akigure fan I'm looking forward the lemon!

Ah Moki. The title of this chapter was very interesting... :-)

And the story was good, of course. Could you just like, murder Akito? I really hate her. REALLY.

Can't wait for the next!

I love yaoi,but Hatori is so OOC is just ridiculous!
did you ever watch the anime or read the manga?
You should.
The pairing is nice,but Hatori isn't Hatori.
Write some originals!

(Drops knife) Force? I did no such thing! (shifty eyes)

:-D That's the first time I had a story dedicated to my honor. You brought tears to my eyes, Moki! Oh, do you mind if I call you Moki? It's kinda cute, don't you think?

Anyway, great chapter FINALLY...speaking of which, I should work on mine now...:-D

P.S-sorry if I put you under pressure. I'll be waiting for your next update. By all means, take your time, AGAIN. :-D

This is very difficult to read because you haven't followed the basic dialogue rule:

In a conversation between characters, start a new paragraph each time the speaker changes. If the same speaker begins a new paragraph of dialogue following a paragraph of dialogue, omit the close quotation marks at the end of the first paragraph.

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Since you didn't separate each speaker in the first chapter, it is very difficult to distinguish when someone has stopped speaking and another has started.

Please fix this. Your story will be much better for it.

Wow. Another steamy chapter.

I liked it.

Yeah I'm a pervert. deal with it.

Lol. Anyway, you should HURRY and get another chapter in. Add some more steamy love. :-) just kidding. Well not really, but who's to blaim?

Loved it, dear. Great job!

To all--since I forgot to mention it before--

The pregnancy thing was a joke. I have never and will never write male pregnancy into a Fruits Basket fic.

Interesting. I had to stop and review right here beause this was a very interesting chapter...lol.

I like this story. You're a very good writer. Keep up the good work!

Oh and P.S-Shigure and Hatori? lovely pairing!

i love hitori and Shigure ^^

Ah! I love this story ^^ Were you really anti-yaoi before? I've always loved Shigure's personality, nice to see Hatori and 'Gure-san together. I'll be looking foreward to your next update with eagerness. YAY! ^^