Very cool characterization of Quistic. I liked the repetition, and the imagery.

I'm glad you decided to keep the pairings out of your story, and it was well written. Quite short, but doesn't matter much, since it's briefness only enhances the meaning of the story anyway. Good job and keep it up.

I still think whips are kinky though. )

That's a good sketch of a very realistic situation.

There are many people like Quistis in this story, constantly dreaming about a better life if they did something they were really interested in.

**happy first review dance** I can see how she'd feel that way...especially around such action and guys like S & S...

-K-