Good job. Not bad at all. Moss still has some serious issues to resolve. LOL

Honestly at first I didn't really care for Rachel, but it was pretty cool the way she was willing to listen to Alec. I am still fuzzy about who Dan is?

ok...so Moss isn't a COMPLETE jerk, sort of. At least he came correct with Max. But if Moss isn't Dan...could Dan be Biggs?

I wonder if its going to be Biggs?

i ENJ0YED Y0UR ST0RY :)

aw it made me cry how sweet! you did a tremendous job! Two thumbs up!

*sigh* wonderful _

though you got me quite much confused... still, everything was explained, including the tiniest detail. having "met" rachel was a nice experience. she's a good hearted girl after all. :)

and the last scene was the best of all of course ;) keep writing...

surprise, surprise! and here i thought it was alec whom dan was looking for and fought at the end of the last chapter. but then, what's this all about berrisford then? why involving him? was dan part of the berrisford agenda, too? or is there something more i just didn't get...?

just as i said: the end is never like you've imagined it to be. and that's definitely a good thing _

things become a bit clearer now. first, i thought 204 was moss, but then i must've been inattentive, because this one's blonde.

and obviously, "dan" wants to get back at alec because he's left his girlfriend die during an escape, right?

rachel's reaction towards alec (i guess they were talking about him) is understandable, though. poor alec. but then he's in love with another one now, right? ;)

i'm still a bit confused...

ha ha. clear as mud is one thing, your fics are a completely other ;) i do always have suspictions, assumptions about the hints and statements you give ... but then it turns out to be something totally different.

i still think that Moss is the mysterious "figure" who wants to separate max and alec. but what for? and who does he work for? and what's this all about his attraction to max? will rachel wake up from her coma?

a very entertaining chapter, too ;)

yeah, yeah. i guess i figured it out finally: you like to confuse your readers - a lot i might add ;D

i really like both max' and alec's denial of their feelings towards each other. the last scene was so cute.

and i wonder if 466 is the mysterious "figure" you mentioned before and if what moss had said was true: how could she be so sure manticore wasn't looking for her - and moss was their instrument?

besides, what does this special affection she feels towards 466 mean? and i don't think it's because of her heat...

well, that was a short insight on my thoughts so far XD

great chapter.

ps: this line made me laugh hard: “Boo, you really need help with that denial problem of yours.” XD

argh ;D the mysterious "figures" in your stories never give away too much! but luckily, everything is revealed at the end. i just wonder where alec knows 466 from?

good work, as always :)

This was an awesome story! Great work! I like how you interwove parts of the show and tweaked it to your (and my) heart's delight!

that was an fantasmobolical ending

you kept the drama exciting and the romance fluffy

all in all i loved it

Awesome chapter, so this was the last chapter, huh! Anyway, totally loved the story as well as your writing skills, cos you're one of the best DA & M/A writers out there! I got all of my questions answered and the M/A scene at the end was so funny and sweet. Hope to read more from you! And again thank you for the lovely story.