 LadyRushia 11/21/05 . chapter 1A job well done. I was ready to cry, so take that as a compliment. I especially liked how cleverly you incorperated the whole idea of Rei being the Princess of Mars in a past life and also how you hinted at her being Sailor Mars when you described how the fire just drew her in.
It also makes you wonder if this is where Rei's temper comes from. Even though she found peace at the end of the story, some of her old feelings could come up in her teenage years thus resulting in a slight temper.
Suggestions? Don't really have any. Ideas? It'd be interesting if you did something like this for the other senshi.
Nice job,
Rushia |