One of the best complex story/play I've ever read and loved.

wow this was disturbing but at the same time felt so right.
Very detailed and emotional.
Thank you for this wonderful work of fiction.

Not gonna lie, this is the best Loveless fanfiction I've ever read, ever.
I can only hope to someday be this masterful in my writing.

This is a little racy. But still cute ^^

wow! i loved the novel Lolita, so when I saw this story, I was instently drawn to it. Your writing style is beautiful.

Chapter 5 was really beautiful, in a sorta morbid way, i guess? But i love your style of writing, the imagery and everything.

N um the epilogue was...confusing...and after reading the author's note, i was STILL confused T.T

But seriously, your story rawked! I love it

This was beautiful.

Oh my gosh. This was beautiful and awesome and full of LOVE. For you. I love you. For writing this. Great job. Thank you so much!

Wow... You do have a lot of detail, I have to say, and I do wish there would be more action and dialogue, but I love it so far!

And the poem was beautiful. That line, "Tomorrow, we shall forget the finches in the trees, and the blue bird upon my windowsill." I loved it.

Amazing... and thrilling. I wish I could write more, about how I love and adore the idea of this story and everything, but alas, I'm a bad reviewer.

Shota, or Lolita-complex, it's a thrilling thing, that only (for me) exist in comics or stories, for when it crosses over into the real world, it becomes 'taboo' and 'illegal'.
And for good reason, children are seen as innocent, and fragile. Children hurt each other, make up, and when they have yet to learn right from wrong, that's the actions of a child.
As they grow older, they develop the skills necessary to live, bullying, lying, isolating. Become more untrusting, hurt others, calculate actions. And then, you wish to capture that innocence again, the same innocence you had a child, but it's gone.

I think Ritsuka in this was once a child, and then THAT innocence was shattered. So badly that the peices couldn't be put back the same way, changing the way 'Ritsuka' saw himself, and giving him a different look on the world.
Making him to mature for his age, learning things he shouldn't know. Ah, would you look at that. I've probably bored you with my views now.

I really do think this was great, enjoyed it very much, thanks.

I just recently read "Lolita", actually, and very much enjoyed your story. It was absoloutly fabulous! =)

*Takes a deep breath*

This story sticks with me in two ways.

One, anything that manages to creep me out a little sticks with me. I am honestly jaded enough that very little can get me to twitch.

Two, I am morbidly drawn to tragedies like this. If you have even the faintest interest in Kingdom Hearts, I suggest reading The Meaning of Silence - it's a tragedy similar to this. (Except that one didn't have an epilogue.)
I have to go read the Epilogue, by the way.
But... but... I just thought you should know that while you creeped me out a bit and nearly made me cry, not to mention abuse babelfish so I could figure out what the hell the French was, this story was... beautiful. Horribly, tragically beautiful.

(Also, I will never, ever forget the French word for butterfly.)

Best Loveless fic I've ever read. I'm a bit scared to watch that movie, I'll have to make a decision. Totally sick but totally awesome all at once. Your the best. Oh and I loved the writing stile; very deep.

I read 'Lolita' not too long ago and loved it. And I have to say, your story is just as enjoyable as the book itself. Thank you for this.

Mikey

wow. this is truely a wonderful story! i thoroughly enjoyed reading it! i certainly learned a few vocab words from this story haha.

but all the workers at the house knew the secrets too... so why would ritsuka only kill ritsu? and wouldn't it be easier to ruin the aoyagi name if all the secrets were exposed?

haha i don't think ritsuka is capable of shooting soubi (but i guess he can in this universe) and that shooting him is little too dramatic for ritsuka's purposes. but the shooting works as a plot twister, i had assumed ritsuka would commit suicide after 'killing' soubi haha.