Wowzers! Nice nice nice nice nice! I love this. Its like . . . cooooollll! Hey, the Little Mermaid was kind of in here, along with a Greek tale. Veryyyyyy neat! :)

Wow! That was Great, i can't even begin to descride it.

I was nearly crying. Thanx for this brilliant story.

I read this fic awhile back on Red Beard's site. It continues to be my absolute

fav J/A fic! Working on any more? Love to read more of your stuff!

I am... most impressed. I could almost see everything happening. Congratulations on an awesome story and some awesome skills. I'll have to check and see if you've got any other stories. Keep writing and best of luck.

Awwww.. *wipes her eyes* It's so sweet! I love it. Shippyness! Very lovely story. The parellels between John and Aeryn and Lastria and Esha were perfect, and the poem was beautiful. Did you make them up or find them somewhere? It's definately going on my favorites list.

ohh, how sweet! Very good, and nicely emotional. wonderful job.

AnitaB

Very very nice! And so sweet, too :)

*wipes tears from eyes* that was so sweet! you are a truly tallented writer. this is just a sugestion, but if i were you i would put the story of Lastria and Esha in Orignals. god, i havn't read a story as good as that since, well, ever!

love Indigo

I'm glad you posted this story here. I read it on a Farscape site, and was totally in awe. As a story, it is utterly fabulous. However, as a fanfic, it is a bit flawed. You have made a mistake that I have seen countless times in Farscape fanfics, that of making Aeryn much too in touch with her emotions and much too ready to express them. She would not blush, and would not get misty eyed. Even in a fic set in the future, she would be in control of her emotions, although she would most likely not hold them back as much. The alien culture seemes to be based too much on a certain Earth-based culture that shall remain un-named, it might have been a tad better if you'd at least changed the appearance to be less human-like. Ok, criticism over. As I said before, this is an absolutely fabulous story. After I read it, I would not read another one that night, because no other fanfic could possibly be as wonderful as this one. My suggestion? Do not limit yourself to fanfic. You clearly have great talent, and if you have the desire to do so, I highly encourage you to venture into the field of original writings. Invent your own characters, your own settings... I'm certain that you would be wonderful.