This was very good. THe only spot I think you may have gotten Inu wrong is him thinking Kagome is weak. If anything I think Kagome is stronger but not as motivated. I can not see anyone that stands up to him as much as she does be considered weak by him.

I liked it!! Very good!

hey that was really good. I write Inuyasha stories too but yours was amazing. please update.

Aww!! So sweet! I think I need to brush my teeth now... ^^ I love!

I like this. The part where he says Kikyo is his past and he will always love her was spot on. The one's we love even though they are dead go on living in our hearts. We will always love them. The end is like he is walking towards his future. At least that is what I got out of it.

very nice ^_^

I love little one offs and this was great!

aww soo sweet!! >>goes off to catch up on the recent chapters...about 30 of them ^^;;

It's really sweet
poetic even

Cute. I think the saying is, "Love is a many splendered thing." Or something like that.