Hey.It was a great story,except the 1st chapter is kind of... short.i won't say anything bad.Its really easy to tell its yours though, because so much of you and your life is in this story. I did enjoy reading the bits i helped you out with, be made into a story.

Can't wait till next chapter.
Cake.xx.

Hay Li,
Very well written story, *smiles*
Told you I'd read it eventually.
Love your acquaintance, B x
A+

O! UPDATE ASAP! ^^

OMG i love the idea of a phycho sakura!

wow... so dark...

i'm actually sirprised that i found something to laugh at. you shouldn't reccomend high-speed chases to anyone, lol. i've been working on my story, and so far it will be 17 chapters long... wow...

good luck wit ur writer's block, hope it doesn't last too long. like how this story is going can't wait till the next chapter! don't give up, it rocks!

DUDE! DAT WAS GREAT! I BET IT WAS LI! OH PUH-LEASE UPDATE! PLS UPDATE!

lovya
kawaii^_^

Wow. I love this story, man its so awesome!! Way better then the preview led me to believe!! ^_^ update soon!!

O.O PLEASE UPDATE SOON I REALLY WANNA NO WHAT HAPPENS ^_^ PLEASER UPDATE!

No problem.

Interesting chapter, can't help but wonder who that was (well, it's probably 'him' but no sense in jumping to conclusions, right?)

God, I hate writers block...best sollution I found is try writing something in a different fandom. Seems to help somewhat, dunno why tho...

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

o! Love it PrEeN! UPDATE ASAP! ^^

I LUV IT! It's funny cuz the way you have turned Sakura into this new character is actually quite like yourself herl! You know getting ** off at popular girls and wanting to punch their faces in. But I luv the story and that was one bloody long chapter! Jeez, my eyes started stinging from looking at the screen for so long. But I really like this story and thats the honest truth like you asked for!

that was good! go Haylii! eheh...

your writing a story with another person, too?! woah! how are you getting everything done! stories and hw and everything...

wow! i'd have a brain overload too, though my brain would probably just reject all that information considering it too complex for me to understand, so just to pretend nothing happened.

did u get that?? i think i'm starting to confuse more and more people everyday...

i think i'm gonna get a headache...-_- from all the contemplating.

anyhow ,this was a cool chapter. can't wait till da next.

Excellent opener.

Very tense atomsphere, very dark.

Be intersting to see what role Syaoran will play in this tale, so far he seems to be about normal except from being a little on the shy side.

Certainy like the premise, look forqards to finding out what happens next.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza