Great fic as usual. Grammer still needs improving. There are other mistakes but I'm picking this (the others need more time + lines XD): Where in the nine hells did you put my Chemistry subject assignment! It's: Where in the nine hells did you put my Chemistry assignment! You don't need to put the word subject before or after a subject like Chemistry, Maths, Biology or any other subjects as it is understood that it is a subject. OK... Going to stop there. There are too many subjects (the word) in there a grand total of 6! XD

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This was so cute