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Shizuku Tsukishima749 2007-09-01 . chapter 3
This is a great story so far! Please keep it up! I feel so bad for Hermione and Harry; poor guy... He really cares about her, but she's left and he doesn't know where she's gone, and then he's intercepted by a Death Eater/his Potions professor?! Sheesh, poor kid! (I know he's not a kid, but...still.) Anyway, please keep going! If it's all right, though, if you could, I would appreciate it if you didn't use such severe swear words, but rather, if you perhaps used no swear words at all, it would do nicely. Thanks, and I hope I'm not offending you!
Sincerely signed,
Shizuu Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)
siriushermionelover 2007-08-24 . chapter 3
I think this has a great plot line. The rape and getting pregnant was great. Harry's feelings are great, Please, please update soon.
~siriushermionelover
Ms willow gosermer 2007-08-01 . chapter 3
great chap i await more
Readerforlife 2007-07-31 . chapter 3
aww poor harry
Ms willow gosermer 2007-06-09 . chapter 2
i love your emotional writting it really makes me feel gald to know about fanfiction please keep writting and cheack out my story.
Readerforlife 2006-09-17 . chapter 2
WOW!1 love it! can't wait for more
Silbemetato 2006-09-17 . chapter 2
ok, this sounds good!, continue soon please!!
NaughtyBunny 2006-09-17 . chapter 2
I cant wait to read more. Its a great story.
Readerforlife 2006-05-18 . chapter 1
is there more?? there has to be more this is GREAT! please post more soon
Elariel Erestorion 2005-12-16 . chapter 1
Very cute Ruthy. I hope you continue this one, I like it very much. By the by your writting has improved amazingly in the last year!
RachL8 2005-08-29 . chapter 1
oh. an intriguing beginning. hope you post more soon!
hhrfan1 2005-08-28 . chapter 1
really good, update soon
goddessnape 2005-08-28 . chapter 1
well, I usually don't go for HPHG pairing, but this one really pulled me in. Please update soon!
Tween Idol 2005-08-28 . chapter 1
oh poor hermione. whose child is it? will you make a sequel? please do this is very good so far.
2005-08-28 . chapter 1
write please!
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