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| PollyWoLoser 2006-09-23 ch 1,  | abusethank you thank you so much! there's not many wil/rebs out there and thank you for writing this really good one. ahh squee this was very cute keep writing ^_^ |
| Kurai I. Sage 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was really cute. If it wasn't for this pairing, Wolt wouldn't be around. Good job. |
| Starfighter364 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is one of my favorite pairings! Good job. |
| TweekinTinkaToy 2005-08-31 ch 1, | abuseThere is only one word to describe this...aw... |
| SitDog-Boy 2005-08-30 ch 1, | abuseit was cute! ^_^ |
| Jackswitch 2005-08-29 ch 1, | abuseAww, sweet... A little grammer-flawed, especially the dialouge block at the end, but otherwise really nice... oh, and school is _always_ bitchy, but that's still a legit excuse, and I hope you enjoy camp! |
| ManaMage 2005-08-28 ch 1, | abuseHurrah!!I loved it!It was awesomley cute and in character.Thank you so much for writing it for me!! |
| Jeanie 2005-08-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseDon't worry, I thought this was rather cute. Even though I prefer Rebecca with Lowen, I still think there aren't enough Rebecca/Wil fics. Also, Wil and Rebecca seemed pretty in-character to me. However, I did see a couple grammar mistakes -- I noticed you seemed to leave out a few commas. Also, the last paragraph is a block of dialogue, so you might want to re-space that. Apart from that, though, I really didn't see anything that was majorly wrong with this fic, so keep up the good work. And I feel your pain about school... Sigh. |
| Lemurian-Girl 2005-08-28 ch 1, | abuseShort but ever so sweet. Finally, a Wil/Rebecca; I'm tired of all these Raven/Rebecca's around. Very nice. ~Lemurian-Girl~ |
| z-animatr 2005-08-28 ch 1, | abuseAw sweet... A bit different from your usual work, it's a lot sweeter :). Although I don't agree with what you said, RebeccaxWil is a really versatile pairing, what with Wil's guilt and Rebecca's jelousy. You got kicked out of your room? damn that's gotta suck. As for camps, it's in two weeks! and then we have another two weeks of holidays... Oh well it's not like I can talk. Keep writing - typitty type type type... |