Very cute!

I think you got Ken's character down just perfectly _

Aww...this story was so cute!...i wanted to cry wen Ran just ran out on Ken...this is a really cute fic...write more!

I want to cry. But in a very good wy. That was a wonderful story. All of my thanks to Aya-chan.

*happy sigh* Ken and Ran are SO CUTE! *laughs* both in their sappyness and their awkwardness. I could so picture Ken's reaction to what he thought was Ran's heavy-handedness when it comes to Aya... m...flustered, indignant Ken. Yum!

Almost angsty at places, but such a soft ending! It's a good fic, for certain.

Ashurei: WOW! THAT WAS COOL!

Yami: And Cute!

Chibi: And fluffy!

Ashurei: But still good! V See ya!

That was /so/ pretty!

I really like the way you write, the dialogue struck me as especially convincing.

More!

awwwwww! that was soo cute!

Aww...so much sweetness in this one!

aww, so sweet _; love it!

This is really good. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the writing.

Sapy but enjoyable. Do you think you could write a sequel?

ahhh, kawaii. ranken is always a good pairing. keep up the great writing!

xD Hehehehehe. ::kisskisskiss:: Great! Very well written... I'm going to be the rude person that I am and point out your use "waste" (waist)... ;_;* But that's okay! I got the meaning (and what a wonderful meaning it was ::sighs::). Bootiful fic.

cuuuteee and sweeet! Ran was a bit ooc in my opinion, but that's okay! I like the fic... so cute!