yo thats funny dont own dont sue and peace and chicken grease. verry funny hahahahah!

good story ,but i have to agree the storys alittle short ,but any way keep updating.

with respects the toltec

dear reader thanks for the review, i to get more from you.

thanks

sincerly the toltec

Ah. The joy of Hayami/Kino. Love the pairing! Well-written, for your first story. And to make it a BSN6 one! Yay! Ah, question, though: Did you see the dubbed or the subbed version?

Now for my nit-picks: It was a bit OOC, and the chapters were too short.

No worries, though! Keep updating!