 fornwalt 10/17/07 . chapter 1Good storyline, good ideas. One thing: Your sentences are often really odd. They don't sound right, or they're fragments. You ought to get a beta to correct the problem. :) |
 romancerox 1/2/07 . chapter 1i'm going to review for this story.. but its not a nice one
first of all, syaoran with tears in his eyes TWICE? one time is ok, but two times? and him blushing for being close to sakura?
the ending was pretty stupid. well thought out, but all in all, stupid. unless the doctors were lying, sakura shouldnt be able to speak at all.
also, the title is SILENT CONFESSIONS, i was hoping for something along those lines. not outloud, which referrs back to the above comment. i cant say keep on writing, for fear of unlogical stories.
yours truly,
romancerox
PS message me, cuss at me, whatever, i dont care |
 Lanita Sena 11/3/06 . chapter 1I thought it was cute! Love it. |
 Inuyashasfavgirl 8/2/06 . chapter 1i loved it it was soo cute keep up the good work. |
 crazyroninchic 5/8/05 . chapter 1Aw! I love all Sakura's little "hoe!"s. They're so cute! V. Kawaii story! |
 orosai 4/15/05 . chapter 1i really like it..._...soplease write more!11 |
 me 4/6/04 . chapter 1 That was the shortest, meanless story I've ever read. |
 Anime-Lover41 8/4/03 . chapter 1ur first fic is very kawaii! u write good romace fics! i love it! u did a great job! |
 Sallmay 7/25/03 . chapter 1aww...love can conquer all |
 bloo c00kie monster 8/20/02 . chapter 1ooOoOO...kAWaii! _ i rEaLLy LuBBeD uR eNdiN! i tHoT iT wuZ rEaLLy kUtE! |
 SakuraJade 6/12/02 . chapter 1Awwww, I think that was cute and funny! Keep up the good work! _ |
 Destiny Star 6/9/02 . chapter 1That was sweet! |
 Gladiel 4/9/02 . chapter 1Cute! It was good that Sakura got to speak again! I love happy endings. Keep up the good work! _ |
 Samara-chan 3/9/02 . chapter 1Aaaaw...SUGOI! That ficcy was so kawaii!_ |
 lil dreamer 2/3/02 . chapter 1 hanyan! oh, so kawaii! a kiss restored sakura-chan's voice. so romantic. *sigh* they don't call little dreamer for nuttin. i dream to much. *sighs happily* *sweatdrops* and sighs. anywho, bye! |