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| DaisyAnimeluvr 2006-09-11 ch 1,  | abuseThat was so good! I loved it! |
| Luvguurl 2006-08-01 ch 1, | abuseCute. |
| Blue Moon201 2006-06-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is sad. |
| Tsuna Dragon 2006-06-08 ch 1, | abuseawe First kill :( (hugs naruto) That was wonderful. Keep it up |
| Midnight Promise 2006-06-08 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this story. I myself am curious of how Naruto would react when he had to kill someone. (I am actually writing a fic about since the idea is bugging me so much!) Very minor OOCness but it was hardly there. Very well written and emotionaly. Loved it. Hopefully there will be more. ^_^ InuNightWalker |
| kirallie 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abuseI liked it! Really good. Glad Naruto's starting to heal. |
| Allison 2005-10-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked it. =] It was good, but I thought it was a little cheesy at some parts. >_< Not bad though. Keep it up. ^_^d |
| Red Roses2 2005-09-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was really awesome story and really emotional. I almost cried in the middle of it. But, you put some commas in there when you were describing how people were talking and you're not supposed to do that. Other than that, and the words difficult and 'and' being stuck together near the end, it was grammatically correct and AWESOME! |
| False-Image 2005-09-23 ch 1, | abuseIt was really great! You showed Naruto's agony well and I'm glad Kakashi was able to help him in the end ^_^ Great story! |
| thuyhy-thuyhy 2005-08-29 ch 1, | abuse^^ I like your story ,go on |
| MysteryLady-Tx 2005-08-28 ch 1, | abusethat was a GREAT story! I really enjoyed it but oh man Poor Naruto, that sucks! THANKS:D |