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Noc and NC 2006-01-19 ch 60,	abuseArrgh! I leave this section for less then a week, and when I come back, your done!! Not that I'm mad, of course. It was a lovly ending, and I must say that everyone has grown from their experiances on Edenia, in a facinating way. I'm kinda happy Zal and Junia left, they became a third wheel at the end. Dylan has a new found respect for Harper, as does Rhade. I walk away a happier person at the end of this fic.
lyekkablack 2006-01-18 ch 60, anon.	abuseWell, first I gotta say I feel really bad for Zal and Junia. I wish they would've stayed, but they deserved a proper good-bye, at least. Second, I loved the Dylan/Harper conversation at the end. Never underestimate the Harper! I'm bummed this amazing story is over, but I can't to see what angsty goodness your next fic will bring. :D One question though. It may have been covered and I simply missed it, but did Rhade really shoot Buz? I know everyone assumed he did, but I don't remember him actually admitting to it. Not that it's important, I'm just curious. Again, brilliant story!
iris-messanger 2006-01-18 ch 1,	abuseI enjoyed reading this story and want to tell you how much I appreciate your quick updates and the fact that you completed it! It is a good story and I hope to read more from you soon
emoras 2006-01-18 ch 60,	abuseSequal Sequal Sequal please, this story was brilliant, i really enjoyed reading it. Thanks, Emily
Benesound 2006-01-16 ch 60,	abuseGreat Ending! I feel sorry for Harper that he waited too long to say goodbye to his friends. Excellent story! There is much you could still do with this. How about a sequel sometime in the future?
aislinn 2006-01-16 ch 60, anon.	abusethis story was amazing! I've been reading it since the beginning and I am sad that it is over. I hope you write another story that is a s good as this one, perhaps a sequal...hint, hint... well, keep the good stories comming! spin, spin ride the whirlwind, knowing when the drumming stops, there'll be no second dance.
Benesound 2006-01-15 ch 19,	abuseChapter 60 isn't showing up.
Benesound 2006-01-14 ch 59,	abuseI'm glad that Harper wasn't hurt too bad by the bantra tea. I'm curious as to how Becka will deal with Zal. He actually might have had a chance with her, before he did this to Harper. Happy to see another chapter and that it's not over yet. :) Great story!
Benesound 2006-01-12 ch 58,	abuseAnother great chapter! I don't know what's going to happen next. I assumed getting off the planet would be the end of the story. I'm glad there's more. :) Keep it coming.
angw 2006-01-11 ch 57,	abuseM Dylan fearing Harper. He certainly has put Harper through a lot of crap. Would be nice to see Dylan not being cryptic and talking to Harper. Great chapters :D
LyekkaBlack 2006-01-10 ch 57,	abuseOoh, I'm really not liking what Dylan is doing, whatever his reasons. Can't wait to hear..er..read what Harper will say about it. Update soon, please! :)
Benesound 2006-01-10 ch 57,	abuseYes! Fear the genius that is Seamus Harper. Mwa HA HA HA! Oops. Sorry. Great Chapter!
always more to think about.... 2006-01-08 ch 56, anon.	abuseWow! Harper's in meddeck and we don't get a weepy bedside/just-outside, brink-of-death scene! Beka and Dylan don't even seem that concerned! Very refreshing and very canon. Good job. I really enjoyed reading that. Also, excellent characterisation with Dylan showing his shift back to a leader once he had backing (with that speech to the Edenians), and keeping Beka in character by letting her assume the less valour of Harper (as is more fitting to canon ;)) Regarding Edenians not being human: right! That was silly of me. Thanks for reminding me! ... does make out humans in a pretty bad light though... why the heck would they make this huge installation and (very) controlling protection if the Edenians were undiscovered natives? Although, I suppose assuming a native people are primitive, and then being patronising and controlling towards them wouldn't really be without precedent in our race ... >< yeah, nice commentary there. I just wonder if any of the crew questioned the founding Earthers' motives?
2006-01-07 ch 56, anon.	abuseGreat chapter! I hope Harper will be okay. I wonder how he'll will react to Dylan covering up Edenia's connection with Earth... More soon, please.
Benesound 2006-01-07 ch 56,	abuseThat was great! I bet the people on Edenia never saw anyone like Trance before. Dylan's editing the reports. Curious. However the reports may be changed, but that won't keep the people of Edenia from telling stories about Harper. I have a feeling the CommonWealth will find out about Harper no matter what Dylan puts in the reports. I hope this isn't the end yet. Great story!

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