 Kaz 2005-11-26 . chapter 4 meh. boring. |
 Verdanii 2005-10-24 . chapter 4Nice ficcy sorta. Hehehrawhhe. |
 Verdanii 2005-10-24 . chapter 3...Irvine. Ew. |
 Verdanii 2005-10-24 . chapter 2CUte, except for Irvy, he's kinda pathetic in the ficcy. He should be with Selphie. |
 Verdanii 2005-10-24 . chapter 1Kinda cute, Chickie. |
 Chaotic-Amy 2005-10-05 . chapter 4awsome ^_^ good ending i liek the pic on the ceiling lol well ttyl
-Amy |
 Chaotic-Amy 2005-10-05 . chapter 3Awsome Chappie i never read this one even though i am your sis :P well talk to you later i'm gunna review on the others and
check out my story :PP
Lucky you keep writing and good luck o_O that was weird lol
-Amy |
 leonhartilly 2005-09-28 . chapter 1Hey, this sound pretty good so far. I'll read more later.
Well done :รพ
Leonhartilly |
 TimberOwls 2005-09-26 . chapter 4Hey I luved this story! |
 Tala Mitena 2005-09-17 . chapter 1Your characterization is horridly distorted. |
 Sushi Sweeties 2005-09-17 . chapter 1isnt his name leon? |
 Rinny (A.K.A. Danielle) 2005-09-16 . chapter 4 Aww! I loved the chappie!! ^-^ they were great hun! And the last part... David loves Danielle... lol Hahhaa! You rock.. hehehe! TTyl, keep em coming! |
 Dudeok 2005-09-15 . chapter 4great story there, love the really sweet Sqinoa's! |
 Squall 2005-09-13 . chapter 4 hmm interesting.. |
 finalfantasyangel 2005-09-13 . chapter 4 Hey that woz cool, great ending! |