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| Alexandria Summers 2006-06-15 ch 5,  | abuseReally well handled. Excellently written. Love the style of writing here. |
| phelipa 2006-03-17 ch 1, | abuseAw! That was so sad! I just finished reading the whole story! Great job and I love how Catherine helped her in the end! :( Poor Sara! Great story! |
| QTR 2006-01-16 ch 4, | abuseE! Update soon! ;) |
| Cherrydrops12 2006-01-07 ch 5, | abuse... |
| Lanta 2005-10-21 ch 5, | abuseQuite a good story, please update :) As I've seen other reviewers have said, you do need to sort out your paragraphs - they're too long, and don't follow the rules, ie starting a new para whenever there's a new topic or a new person speaking. You could also do with writing longer chapters - ch4 was only one para! But I'll definately continue reading, I've added it to my story alerts. |
| Nepeace 2005-09-10 ch 5, | abuseIt's a really good story but as said before your paragraphs do indeed need some work, because you have written everything in one paragraph it makes it really hard to read sometimes. It all blends together. But apart from that you did a good job writing this. Angelique |
| i-love-svu 2005-08-29 ch 1, | abuseWhen you say I need to work on my paragraphs, do you mean it's hard to follow? If that's the case I'll get on it as soon as I finish my second fanfic. Thank you SO much for the reviews! |
| angry penguin 2005-08-29 ch 5, | abuseThat was a really good story. |
| MadGeorge 2005-08-29 ch 5, | abuseGood Story, Very Similar To One Of Mine Called "The Fabulour Life Of Catherine Willows". You Need Some Formatting Though. |
| icklebitodd 2005-08-29 ch 5, | abuseahh poorsara erm well written enjoyed reading it and the mix of saras subtle angst and mystery throughout was good. but erm still bugs me how much does the bugman really know? |
| fredchester 2005-08-28 ch 5, | abusethis was really good. you need to work on your paragraphs though, it's a bit hard to read. anyway, i love a good catherine sara story- and this is one of the best. hope to read more from you soon. |