Confusing? What's confusing about it! It was clear to me.

Tee hee. You crack me up Fen. What made me laugh was first of all Wyldon about to "drop out" and take to the road, ie. hippie style of the 60's. I can see him growing his hair really long and wearing a headband and beaded necklace. The second thing was Wyldon seeing the silhouette of his "prince" on the horizon like a mirage, there wherever he looks. Aw! You have this thing about absurd images that always gets me.

Well done. Now how does poor Wyldon deal with a **-off Lady Vivenne?

Imo

"¹So named for the deadly firefly fever that raged throughout the eastern lands, afflicting infants and youth. Note of interest: the young Lord of Stone Mountain was a rare case that managed to survive the illness. This doubtless, accounts for certain… ah, things.

Further note of interest: granted, some historians say that there were no promising prospects in Generation Firefly, and that the gods were simply passing time whilst they awaited Generation Gods’-touched, so named for the incessant meddling of the gods during the lives of King Jonathan and his Queen Thayet’s generation."

What?...that's takeing...quite a few...liberties.

Ok, so you already know I think this is more your voice than Wyldon's. It's also as confusing as everyone else has said it is (especially the bit when it gets to Vivenne's letter - and what's going on there? - oh, ok. I just got it now...)

Yes, I think I might actually understand this, now. Imagine that!

And I love the footnotes and the first paragraph. Teehee. (And the wink. Ozorne so used his makeup to flirt with the boys - poor Wyldon didn't stand a chance.)

Write a sequel, now, ok? Ok.

Gotta love the Wyldon slash.

im confused...but i liked it! it was very well written! i just dont really get it...write more!

I love this one-shot! It's so sweet and simple and Wyldon is so lovely. Great job!

this was...interesting. and i'm HIGHLY confuzzled. explain, please!

VERY WELL written, I think...did u read Tom Sawyer?

lol, that was hilarious! i didn't understand half of it, but that's not the point. What on EARTH were you thinking?!?!?!?! I LOVE IT!