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ImitatedNeverDuplicated 7/25/10 . chapter 1
A hummer?

Oh, puh-leaze.

More like a 16 wheeler. I didn't notice it at first though, but now that you mentioned it, I notice it.
Flower K. Owl 2/19/09 . chapter 1
(looks at summery) ha ha, plot hole you could drive a hummer through.

(reads story) OMG! why didn't I realize that? I was so stupid!

this story is awesome!
Molleyn 10/26/08 . chapter 1
Ah, yes! That filled a hole I didn't know needed filling. Thanks!
PumpkinDolce 9/15/08 . chapter 1
I totally agree,there was no way he made this room by himself.

It's a good idea,and a great explanation.Love it!
CrayonsPink 3/1/08 . chapter 1
I liked your take on the movie. Now that I think about it, the underground room makes NO sense. Thanks for bringing that to my attention! Anyways, keep up the good work!
Solo Maxwell-Yamato 8/25/07 . chapter 1
That was bugging me too. This is a great answer to the 'Sekrit Underground Hidey-Hole'. :) Nicely written too.
little.miss.sarcasm 5/20/07 . chapter 1
i agree

i mean, i doubt howard would be able to make an entire underground vault to keep GHOST in without the noticing of Julie of one of the FIVE kids! *of course not all were alive at the time...*

i liked it and hope you update soon!
Epitome of Bold 1/31/06 . chapter 1
GREAT update soon please
Cadao 1/25/06 . chapter 1
oh thank you, that bothered me too! (who has that under their house without anyone knowing?)
mugglewolf 12/7/05 . chapter 1
man, i never thought about that. that is a big plot hole. couldn't very well build it after they moved in, could they...hmm, well it is a kid's movie, we must be forgiving. good observation.
Kerttu 9/2/05 . chapter 1
VOW! Love this. It is a good and very nice plot-hole patch. And you just paint the nicest picture of true life also. Thank you!
Mojave Dragonfly 8/28/05 . chapter 1
Yeah, I noticed that plot tunnel, too. I had more than a few complaints with that movie, actually, but particularly the idea that you could call in the contractors to excavate and install this secret complex under your house, without either your family or your neighbors noticing - that was too much. This works.
Mojave Dragonfly 8/28/05 . chapter 1
Yeah, I noticed that plot tunnel, too. I had more than a few complaints with that movie, actually, but particularly the idea that you could call in the contractors to excavate and install this secret complex under your house, without either your family or your neighbors noticing - that was too much. This works.
Dawnie-7 8/28/05 . chapter 1
Nice. I do love it when you fix things up like this :)
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