Now this is truly a work of art. I really liked it and was saddened by one event that happened in it. I don't know why this fic isn't getting a lot of reviews but this is well worth the time. If your reading this review and not the story, I suggest you do it and don't forget to review.

Hey! I thought this story was really well written. I also liked how you are looking at the SeeDs training from the persepectives of some of the smaller characters in the game, like Xu. I hope you continue this story and add other chapters about Quistis's continued training and all of the other SeeDs training. Good job! :)

-Cassy

Now this is really good. I'll be reading the next part of this soon. I like to see a story where Xu or somebody that wasn't really in the spotlight in the game is in.

Wow! this is a wicked story! I hope you are going to continue on with it! I want to see how everything turns out!