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| Brakish 2006-12-01 ch 1, anon. | abusewow! I really liked that! Excellent job capturing Volt's personality |
| REW 2006-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseExtremely funny. Sounds very much like Volt with drama. Need to do more. And a full continuation in greater detail! Volt:No! NO MORE! People will laugh! Me:SHUT UP! OR I'll break your arm and throw you all at once using O-Goshi A.K.A. Ju-justu. Volt: ... Me:Good, now as I was saying, It would be a hit if you wrote a full story about this *whisper behind back of hand* "this type of story would also be a hit with LeannKou type deal. |
| Daemonmaker Kyoujin 2005-11-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was plausible as hell especially in his ending. Good stuff I think I might do one as well. |
| crimson-fantasy 2005-11-06 ch 1, | abusenice fic i think you did a good job relaying votls feelings i like it good one-shot short though |
| Zeon of the Twilight Blade 2005-11-03 ch 1, | abuseAwesome! Volt has Emotional Troubles, I love it! Write more, Write more or I shall come after you. Volt: You don't even know Melly. "Oh...Yeah...well...write more or I shall bug you lots." Sion: OOH What a threat. Kou: I'm sure Melly is just shaken. "..." *Several sounds of a fight are heard* "Sorry about that, Why characters give me so much trouble I will never understand, the point is, I wanna see more from you." |
| Water-star 2005-09-01 ch 1, | abuseWow u never get 2 read many Volt/Echidna fanfics so i like this one. I agree also with the fact that they're aren't many Bouncer fanfics and when there r, they're NEVER finished! I hope u'll get 2 write so more Bouncer fics soon bcoz we need more! |