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Reviews For: Under My Skin

Brakish
2006-12-01
ch 1, anon.
abusewow! I really liked that! Excellent job capturing Volt's personality
REW
2006-01-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseExtremely funny. Sounds very much like Volt with drama.
Need to do more. And a full continuation in greater detail!

Volt:No! NO MORE! People will laugh!

Me:SHUT UP! OR I'll break your arm and throw you all at once using O-Goshi A.K.A. Ju-justu.

Volt: ...

Me:Good, now as I was saying, It would be a hit if you wrote a full story about this *whisper behind back of hand* "this type of story would also be a hit with LeannKou type deal.
Daemonmaker Kyoujin
2005-11-17
ch 1,
abuseThat was plausible as hell especially in his ending. Good stuff I think I might do one as well.
crimson-fantasy
2005-11-06
ch 1,
abusenice fic i think you did a good job relaying votls feelings i like it good one-shot short though
Zeon of the Twilight Blade
2005-11-03
ch 1,
abuseAwesome!

Volt has Emotional Troubles, I love it!

Write more, Write more or I shall come after you.

Volt: You don't even know Melly.

"Oh...Yeah...well...write more or I shall bug you lots."

Sion: OOH What a threat.

Kou: I'm sure Melly is just shaken.

"..."

*Several sounds of a fight are heard*

"Sorry about that, Why characters give me so much trouble I will never understand, the point is, I wanna see more from you."
Water-star
2005-09-01
ch 1,
abuseWow u never get 2 read many Volt/Echidna fanfics so i like this one. I agree also with the fact that they're aren't many Bouncer fanfics and when there r, they're NEVER finished! I hope u'll get 2 write so more Bouncer fics soon bcoz we need more!
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